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Maya
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0 posted 08-28-99 05:36 PM       View Profile for Maya   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Maya

eagerly peering through
strands of fence erected
around this fragile heart
quietly wondering about
the ground just beyond
this confine I call home
hesitantly reaching across
the span barring freedom
fingers reaching, arms aching
raven coloured clouds above
mist soaked soil below
I, humbly bent in supplication
ice tears falling in summer rain
no hand can wipe away
no heart can carry the cross
dimly seeing the fields beyond
head bowed, waiting for fate
to turn her hand my way
my tongue screaming your name
to the heavens, to the sky keeper
I long to loose these cobweb chains
and float away, like a dandelion sprite
carried on the singing winds
across the seas, across my dreams
to wake in another time and place
with someone other than
the subject of my malcontent



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Nan
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1 posted 08-28-99 08:30 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Nice imagery - Geesh...
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2 posted 08-28-99 08:33 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

.....nothing but blue skyes do I see....
Michael
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3 posted 11-15-1999 09:12 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow, what a wonderful read this was. Very vivid imagery, truly loved this one.


Michael
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4 posted 11-15-1999 10:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is absolutely beautiful! I love this Maya!

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