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Wayward winds

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 08-28-99 04:13 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Wayward Winds

The winds blow wayward salty fresh
And lays the salt upon my flesh.
The sky is blue the stars abound,
My spirit soars horizon bound.

My ship flails water to a froth,
Powered by the wind, natures broth.
I feel so free that I would cry,
Just the ocean waters and I.

The days are bright and the nights a sight,
It's magic to me, day or night.
The gifted freedoms wayward bend,
It is the freedom I transcend.

The raw and the crude set my mood
And control to me is my food.
It strokes the essence of my soul,
Makes me willing to pay the toll.

I sail by the powers that be.
Ship and skill and grace of the sea.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Seaangel
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1 posted 08-28-99 05:22 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

What can I say, Seymour? I love the sea and you've just expressed it better than I ever have. A beautiful series of images that culminate in a dense summary. Wonderful. Let's keep this one at the top.
Pepper
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I agree with Seaangel.Again a wonderful work Sy!!!

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Shannon
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3 posted 08-28-99 06:46 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Seymour, I had pictured it as I was reading, and what a beautiful picture it was.
Well Done!!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 08-28-99 07:02 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Seaangel, Pepper and Dark angel
I've been visited by the angels.
Thank you all so much for the encouragment.
I love you all.
 
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