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Loves Me, Loves Me Not

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Emmy
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0 posted 08-28-99 11:23 AM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

He loves me, he loves me not...

A girl sits forlornly,
her head in her hands
Tears fall from her eyes and mix with petals on the floor below her

He loves me, he loves me not...

There was no denying now,
only pity for the way it really was
Slowly it had dwindled down to bare reality
Hope was not spared

He loves me, he loves me not...

Heartache has moved in,
preparing to stay and make itself at home
Right in among the petals
The decorate the floor with lost desparation

He loves me, he loves me not...

Everything had pointed in the wrong direction
But the flowers had been her last hope
and yet even the flowers had not lied
The truth lay scattered at her feet

He loves me, he loves me not...
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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 08-28-99 12:19 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Emmy,
I liked the poem.Nice job.
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Sad but beautiful. Why not get some more flowers until it comes out right!
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3 posted 08-28-99 04:22 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

So sad, but powerful.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."
 
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