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Masasa

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if you were to ask me, what would make me smile...
i would tell you, let me crawl around inside your head.
if you were to ask me, what would make me think...
i would tell you, chose a topic that is interesting to you.
if you were to ask me, what would i like to discuss...
i would tell you, anything in the current issue of The Economist.
If you were to ask me, what do I hate most in the world...
I would tell you, being away from you.
If you were to ask me, what I like most about you...
I would tell you, the way I feel when I am with you, when I think of you, when I talk to you.
If you were to ask me, what I like least about you...
I would tell you, even the thing I like least is worth loving more than what I loved most about any other man i have ever loved.
If you were to ask me what would make me cry..
I would tell you, anything that hurt you.
If you would ask me, what made me love you...
I would tell you, that you existed, that you are simply... you.
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When what you "like the least" is turned into a positive, you've written a poem that I'll enjoy.....
 
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