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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-27-99 10:50 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

There was once a time when we two were one.
We shared the same mother and the same womb.
Sadly the thread of your life came undone.
Haunted by you, my life became a tomb.

You have been there each day of our life.
Sometimes I hear you whispering my name.
From beyond the veil you have shared my strife.
Upon this life you have an equal claim.

We will be together again one day.
The veil will part as we walk hand in hand.
Within each other's arms we two shall lay.
Then we will be one again,as was planned.

Until then upon my sadness I dwell.
For you my sister, I am DarkAngel.


©1999 DreamEvil



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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


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Poet deVine
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1 posted 08-27-99 10:58 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Very good DE! I take it DarK AngeL was a twin? Never saw a poem about this subject. I like it!
Dark Angel
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2 posted 08-27-99 11:01 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

DreamEvil...this sonnet has really touched my heart, to read what you have written about my feelings , my sister, my loss is truly amazing, I have no words to describe how I feel right now Thank you .
DreamEvil
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3 posted 08-27-99 11:03 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Dear Lady,
I lost my twin as well. 'Tis still a painful thing for me.
Dark Angel
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4 posted 08-27-99 11:39 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

DreamEvil, Tis wonderful to be able share this with you.Together dear friend we will see it through
Alwye
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In the space between moments


5 posted 08-27-99 11:43 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wonderful work, Dream..so very sad.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


Blackdrake
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6 posted 08-28-99 12:29 AM       View Profile for Blackdrake   Email Blackdrake   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blackdrake

Most Excellent Dream.

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Thy own Darkness shall conquer the Light
WhtDove
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7 posted 08-28-99 12:47 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I didn't know! I am sorry to hear that. Looks like you two can help each other.
You did a great job here Dream!!! This was very touching!
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 08-28-99 12:55 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Excellent piece of work Dream. This poem is so hauntingly sad. You outdid yourself on this one!!!
Gentle Soul
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This is beautiful.. well written big brother...

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