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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
There was once a time when we two were one. We shared the same mother and the same womb. Sadly the thread of your life came undone. Haunted by you, my life became a tomb. You have been there each day of our life. Sometimes I hear you whispering my name. From beyond the veil you have shared my strife. Upon this life you have an equal claim. We will be together again one day. The veil will part as we walk hand in hand. Within each other's arms we two shall lay. Then we will be one again,as was planned. Until then upon my sadness I dwell. For you my sister, I am DarkAngel. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good DE! I take it DarK AngeL was a twin? Never saw a poem about this subject. I like it! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
DreamEvil...this sonnet has really touched my heart, to read what you have written about my feelings , my sister, my loss is truly amazing, I have no words to describe how I feel right now Thank you . |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Dear Lady, I lost my twin as well. 'Tis still a painful thing for me. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
DreamEvil, Tis wonderful to be able share this with you.Together dear friend we will see it through |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful work, Dream..so very sad. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
Most Excellent Dream. ------------------ Thy own Darkness shall conquer the Light |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I didn't know! I am sorry to hear that. Looks like you two can help each other. You did a great job here Dream!!! This was very touching! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent piece of work Dream. This poem is so hauntingly sad. You outdid yourself on this one!!! |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
This is beautiful.. well written big brother... ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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