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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 08-27-99 10:13 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

If you're gonna walk away -
just be sure to walk my way...
I am knocking on your door,
- can you come out and play?

I'm the wind that calls your name
I'm the sun that warms your face -
Be secure within my arms,
If you're feeling out of place.

Lay next to me - I'll hold you...
Close your eyes, a peaceful sleep -
When morning comes I'll wake you
My promises - - I keep.

In my playground you will find -
many thoughts to thrill your soul...
Find your ecstasy within me,
Walk my way & become whole.

You chase me & I'll catch you -
We are children - come and play,
If you're gonna walk away -
just be sure & walk my way.........


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Elizabeth
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1 posted 08-27-99 10:22 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Wow beautiful! I really enjoyed this one.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."
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2 posted 08-27-99 10:26 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I cannot trust my fingers to respond to this poem. I'll be banned for life! I'll just say...well done.
DreamEvil
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3 posted 08-27-99 10:48 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

'Tis true this poem grabs hold of me in more ways than one.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvilŠ


Michael
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4 posted 08-27-99 10:56 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow,
I am truly stunned with this. Exquisite and enticing.


Michael
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5 posted 08-28-99 01:26 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Oooh, I really liked this one. A who am I kinda thing... So who are you???

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I believe in the sand beneath my toes.
The beach gives a feeling, an earthly feeling.
I believe in the faith that grows.
-Stephan Jenkins-
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6 posted 08-28-99 06:05 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Great poem pFF! A simple, honest poem.
Nan
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7 posted 08-28-99 09:36 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

PFF..... I wish I had written this one - It reflects my attitude beautifully - would you consider selling me the rights to it???? or maybe the barter system or something??? or could I just borrow it and put "PFF" at the bottom?...
Mark R.
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8 posted 08-28-99 09:41 AM       View Profile for Mark R.   Email Mark R.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark R.

Brilliant, simply brilliant. What else can I say...
caroline
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9 posted 08-28-99 09:55 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

'Tis brilliant!!! Me too, Nan! Wish I had written this one!



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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
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10 posted 08-28-99 06:37 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Superb!!
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 08-28-99 07:24 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

pFF,
The simplicity struck me dumb.
Right now I'm only numb.
Superb job.
 
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