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My playground is yours.... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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If you're gonna walk away - just be sure to walk my way... I am knocking on your door, - can you come out and play? I'm the wind that calls your name I'm the sun that warms your face - Be secure within my arms, If you're feeling out of place. Lay next to me - I'll hold you... Close your eyes, a peaceful sleep - When morning comes I'll wake you My promises - - I keep. In my playground you will find - many thoughts to thrill your soul... Find your ecstasy within me, Walk my way & become whole. You chase me & I'll catch you - We are children - come and play, If you're gonna walk away - just be sure & walk my way......... [This message has been edited by poetFemmeFatale (edited 08-27-99).] [This message has been edited by poetFemmeFatale (edited 08-27-99).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Wow beautiful! I really enjoyed this one.  ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I cannot trust my fingers to respond to this poem. I'll be banned for life! I'll just say...well done. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
'Tis true this poem grabs hold of me in more ways than one. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, I am truly stunned with this. Exquisite and enticing. Michael |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Oooh, I really liked this one. A who am I kinda thing... So who are you??? ------------------ I believe in the sand beneath my toes. The beach gives a feeling, an earthly feeling. I believe in the faith that grows. -Stephan Jenkins- |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Great poem pFF! A simple, honest poem. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
PFF..... I wish I had written this one - It reflects my attitude beautifully - would you consider selling me the rights to it???? or maybe the barter system or something??? or could I just borrow it and put "PFF" at the bottom?... |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
Brilliant, simply brilliant. What else can I say... |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
'Tis brilliant!!! Me too, Nan! Wish I had written this one! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Superb!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
pFF, The simplicity struck me dumb. Right now I'm only numb. Superb job. |
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