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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396


0 posted 1999-08-27 08:40 PM


Usted persigue después del extremo del arco iris, tan
convencido le está concluído el horizonte?
El oro usted nunca hallazgo pasará cómo bien, cuando su
cara joven arruga y wizen?

Usted busca a la reina en el desfile de la vida, dejando así
que muchos otros le pasan cerca?
Usted dormirá en la cama sola usted haber hecho, marcando el paso del tiempo con cada suspiro?

Es la hierba más verde en la otra cara, pues usted mira a
través de los campos de su vecino?
Hay nadie en a las cuales usted puede confiar,
nadie quién el dolor de su alma rinde?

Es su meta toda que usted puede realmente ver, cegado
pues usted está por su búsqueda solitaria?
No puede usted abrirse los ojos en la belleza, o es ese
molde de su corazón con el resto?

Una lengüeta bifurcada dará una respuesta veraz, puede él
cuando el corazón se hace frente con la desesperación?
Mírela no para señora Love a romance, porque su búsqueda
para el amante que la señora comparte.


Translation:


Do you chase after the rainbow's end,
so convinced it's over the horizon?
How well will the gold you never find spend,
when your young face does wrinkle and wizen?

Do you look for the Queen in life's parade,
letting so many others pass you by?
Will you sleep in the lonely bed you've made,
marking the passage of time with each sigh?

Is the grass greener on the other side,
as you gaze across your neighbor's fields?
Is there no one in which you can confide,
no one to whom the pain of your soul yields?

Is your goal all that you can really see,
blinded as you are by your lonesome quest?
Can you not open your eyes to beauty,
or is that cast from your heart with the rest?

Will a forked tongue give a truthful answer,
can it when the heart is faced with despair?
Look not for Lady Love to romance her,
for your search for love the Lady does share.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



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Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12
Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA
1 posted 1999-08-28 01:20 AM


wow.. this is good.. hehe.. brother, you amaze me..

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-08-28 01:38 AM


Wonderful work, you never cease to amaze me!
Kelly
Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145

3 posted 1999-08-28 02:22 AM


Ohhh That was great. This is my new favorite poem.
Terri
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since 1999-08-08
Posts 82
Turtle Creek, PA
4 posted 1999-08-28 02:40 AM


Very lovely...I am SO glad that you included the translation. It was a totally different poem by the time I was thru with it...LOL
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since 1999-07-05
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At the edge and a doorway,TX
5 posted 1999-08-30 06:11 AM


You did wonderfully with what I wanted for a piece.. Thank you for the Spanish.. I shall print it out and keep it on my bulletinboard by my computer.. I was having such a hard time finding a good Spanish piece.. Now I have found it.. Thank You so very much..

Love,
Lady

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Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.



Comtesse de Chamillart
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 10
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6 posted 1999-08-30 06:16 AM


Very awesome piece indeed! I do love it!

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~the Comtesse de Chamillart~

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