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the garden

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markdbarton
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0 posted 08-26-99 05:49 PM       View Profile for markdbarton   Email markdbarton   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for markdbarton

The Garden

As the summer days pass
the feeling of love grows
the closeness never before shown
In the garden they had made
a love of which would never fade
the garden was a symbol of there lasting love
something shared to all that would come
As the years passed on there came many storms
but the love they shared carried them through
The storms of life that damage so many
the scars on these you could not find any
the love served as a protection from wind and rain
and also the pain
The garden still there even though they are gone
but the love once showed remains forever

any comments would be helpfull

[This message has been edited by markdbarton (edited 08-26-99).]
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Severn
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1 posted 08-26-99 09:24 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is very sweet Mark. It's a nice metaphor for love.
IsabelleSkye
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2 posted 08-27-99 08:29 AM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

A garden is a beautiful expression of love.
As was this
I.Skye

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"I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself,
than to be crowded on a velvet cushion."
.....Henry David Thoreau
Colin
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3 posted 08-27-99 03:49 PM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

I like this... a subject close to my own heart and well written.

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I believe in fairy tales but then I'm just a silly romantic, what do I know?
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