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Toerag
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0 posted 1999-08-26 02:03 PM


I'm headin' to the Adult Site,
It's gonna be my home,
I don't want to start a fight,
Or have a deleted poem.

It's not a very active site,
Don't know why it's so ignored?
But my best friend was quite polite,
'Bout my stuff that's not quite the "norm."

I only post for laughter,
It's just the way I am,
But I wouldn't send my daughter,
To read my stuff either man!

Ciao!

© Copyright 1999 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-08-26 02:11 PM


Toe: The only advantage I can think of to having you confine your work to one site is that it will be easier to find. For I will surely be looking for it!!

I don't think much of a friend that would make you feel unwelcome or uncomfortable... I think I'd first direct a child towards the teen forum. For to be honest, there are very few poems posted here that I'd consider suitable for children... whether they have a dirty word, thought, or even innuendo doesn't matter... most of them have an adult perspective. I would, however, not be ashamed for my Dad to see them... and he's an 80 year old Baptist deacon.

Toerag
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2 posted 1999-08-26 02:19 PM


I don't think ya understand dear...I think in this case they're right...I wouldn't want to send my daughter here and see some of this crap I write! (Notice the rhyme?)....But this is a great place, and they are nice enough to offer options, and the talent and wisdom here should not be "infected" with other than good clean wholesome type posts.......I would have to agree with this 100% now that I think about it. Yanno I love the guy....and, as much as I hate to agree with the prick, he's right yanno...LOL.....besides, I think I have gone "overboard" many times and Nan has just let me slide, and she shouldn't...nor should I take advantage of her undying patience either......I'm not offended, nor even hurt or feel badly.....just agree...You know how I am? Sometimes I just don't think about who all will read my stuff....and that's not a good thing.
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3 posted 1999-08-26 02:27 PM


As always, you're more gracious than I could ever be. And wherever you post will be a better place because of your presence.
Toerag
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4 posted 1999-08-26 02:45 PM


Actually?...With the huge response I've gotten from my garbage today...it may be wiser to just go back to that "amateur" board we used to visit?...LOL.......but it's time to at least abide by the rules......
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5 posted 1999-08-26 02:54 PM


Toerag: Once again, I can see how valuable my opinion is! LOL. What garbage? Where? *G* Ya talking 'bout my poems again? LOL.
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6 posted 1999-08-26 02:59 PM


i am sorry to see you decide to move to post in a different area. i wish you luck, and with time i spose i shall go and read what you have written in the other places. i feel that your humor and perspective will be missed here.

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Toerag
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7 posted 1999-08-26 03:02 PM


If poetry is a reflection of what's in one's soul...I'm in a heap of "chit"...yanno?...LOL
Hey, if I can ever come up with something clean and serious, I'll be back here....thanks for the kind words.....

Craig
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8 posted 1999-08-26 03:08 PM


Being British I am reluctant to venture into the Adult Forum, but if thats where you are posting from now on I guess I'll tag along and follow you in. ( will it be big enough for all your fans?)

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LngJhnAg
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9 posted 1999-08-26 03:13 PM


I apologize, Toe. I know you and I can say things to each other that women would never let slide. Incidently, you have a great talent in you for the words... I also apologize to everybody else for my complicity. My teenage daughter might do better in Teenagers - but I wanted her to read Nan's poems so she could see what a marvelous language we have. I'll get a password for Adult... I'd hate to lose track of you for too long... could be damaging to my sterling reputation.
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10 posted 1999-08-26 03:14 PM


Well, I'm gonna seek you out and hunt you down 'cause I was as guilty as you. Maybe we an start a "Tales from the Darkside....."
Toerag
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11 posted 1999-08-26 03:15 PM


LJA...and another thing.....then you'd have to bear that damn Balladeer all by yourself too yanno?.....LOL....I think your daughter would be far better off here if it's kept decent than on the teen board....don't you?
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12 posted 1999-08-26 03:17 PM


Balladeer...yanno?....I know you'll track me down...I know you're probably planning on severe retribution already...I'm looking forward to many more "duels" in the future!
LngJhnAg
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13 posted 1999-08-26 03:21 PM


I do better as the foil of a poem rather than a rapier wit. balladeer has put me in my place just like you have in the past. my spirit is broken. I am no longer the noble kitty-kicker my children once were so proud to take to school for show and tell. Now, I am just a shadow of the man I used to be. Pewrhaps somebody could post now and tell me how wonderful I am? OK?
Toerag
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14 posted 1999-08-26 03:22 PM


Oh God! Yammean you haven't been to the adult forum yet?.....Am I ever in for a rash of "chit" now?......LOL
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15 posted 1999-08-26 03:25 PM


My daughter would love to take me to school for "Show and Tell" right now?...."This is Frankenstein, my dad....ya see all the stitches around his head?"....Say Boo dad...g'head.......He get's his iron bar through his neck next week."....Show them that stiff legged walk daddy.....Ya should hear him sing too....g'head dad, do your rendition of the Monster Mash."....."The Wolfman?...Huh! That ain't nuthin! G'head dad, go hit that bearded woman....my teacher....g'head...show 'em dad!"

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 08-26-99).]

Lorelei54
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16 posted 1999-08-26 03:25 PM


Well Toe, I have a adult forum password thingie..so I can read your stuff if you leave here..and I will...

LJA...posting here and now to tell you I think you are WONDERFUL...Now come home and show me?

Toerag
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17 posted 1999-08-26 03:46 PM


Lorelei...or, at least, just make him go home?....Will ya? LOL
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18 posted 1999-08-26 03:47 PM


Toe..I wish he would "come" home...LOL..how you feeling today?
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19 posted 1999-08-26 03:47 PM


Lorelei....he's no Longfellow!
Lorelei54
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20 posted 1999-08-26 03:49 PM


'deer..what is that supposed to mean? Picking on a poor man who is not here to defend himself...
Toerag
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21 posted 1999-08-26 03:51 PM


Lorelei...honestly?..Awful! LOL....the pain's truly extraordinary, I won't take the pain pills, and I'm just hangin' in there best as possible....it'll get better though.....Guess I'm gonna go get some "head"......(on my beer glass sorry to say), but I'll see yall tomorrow.................g'nite...
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22 posted 1999-08-26 03:52 PM


you should take the pain pills and sleep...we will still be here when you feel better...or let someone come take care of you...I know a willing volunteer....
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23 posted 1999-08-26 03:53 PM


oops! computer glitch....or Long John's spirit.

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 08-26-99).]

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24 posted 1999-08-26 03:55 PM


Easy. It's the coward's way. He's too tough when he's here to defend himself!
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26 posted 1999-08-26 04:00 PM


!

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27 posted 1999-08-26 04:05 PM


!

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28 posted 1999-08-26 04:14 PM


!

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29 posted 1999-08-26 04:15 PM


Lorelei: I do, too! *G*
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30 posted 1999-08-26 04:17 PM


Geesh, Balladeer!!! Does anyone have some Tums they could loan the man????? Please!!!

I was gonna say that any tales you and Toe write will be well worth reading... but you need to work on that repetition problem! LOL

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31 posted 1999-08-26 04:23 PM


I'm telling ya, it was LongJohn's spirit! That's why he's so tough. He can zap ya without even being here!

But don't you worry, sweet Southern. When I go after Toe, it'll be the same way....multiple times LOL!

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32 posted 1999-08-26 04:27 PM


You don't play fair, Balladeer! LOL. You know darn well your comments about multiples (and Toe... pant... be still my heart! *G*) sent my mind skittering straight for the gutter... but since you know, I won't have to go to Adult to post them! *EG*
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33 posted 1999-08-26 04:49 PM


Oh, thank you , Suthern. The picture you have posted in my mind about you...and Toe...and multiples will insure that I don't eat for at least a week!
LngJhnAg
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34 posted 1999-08-26 04:52 PM


Belle

knowing how far away from Toe your are in real time, I can only offer this advice - if the multiples are bothering you, you can always stop at one, yanno. < innocent eyes >

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35 posted 1999-08-26 05:10 PM


'Deer: (sigh) I suspect Toe agrees with you... As LJA (and his "innocent eyes") have indicated, Toe keeps hundreds of miles between us. *S*

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LngJhnAg
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36 posted 1999-08-26 05:17 PM


I really am confused here, Belle. I blessed Toerag's "Spilt Purse" poem, and you seemed to agree with my blessing. Are you sure you agree with what I said? Perhaps you should double check it, just in case. *g*
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37 posted 1999-08-26 05:25 PM


I rarely respond to Toe because I'm usually in pain from LOL, and cannot get my fingers to respond. I agree, some of his stuff belongs in the Adult section. However, if we can all bounce back and forth, then I think some of his other "lighter" work shouldn't be placed here, just so young'uns can watch out for the boogie man. After all, Hallowe'en will be here before long.

Oops. I may have just given him some food for thought.

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Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



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38 posted 1999-08-26 05:28 PM


LJA: Write it down, sailor... I'm speechless. *EG* I lack the words to adequately describe to you how impressed I am with your blessing.....

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39 posted 1999-08-26 06:18 PM


Yo Toe - Don't forget to post on the Open Forum when you have a poem that your daughter can read - You write some of those, don't ya???.....
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