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La Morte D'Amour

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-26-99 09:13 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Priez-vous souffrent pas la mort de l'amour.
"Je ne vous aime pas maintenant. ", êtes des mots que vous devriez craindre.
J'espère que c'est une chose que vous apprenez pas de.
Vos ruptures de coeur encore avec chacune unshed la larme.

"Je ne vous aime pas maintenant. ", êtes des mots que vous devriez craindre.
Les mots descendent dans votre âme et la détachent.
Vos ruptures de coeur encore avec chacune unshed la larme.
L'amour devrait être évité bien dès le début.

Les mots descendent dans votre âme et la détachent.
Votre âme embrasse le froid amer de l'hiver.
L'amour devrait être évité bien dès le début.
On dise l'amour est le plus cruel des mensonges, vérité.

Votre âme embrasse le froid amer de l'hiver.
Serrure loin votre coeur pour éviter le charme de l'amour.
On dise l'amour est le plus cruel des mensonges, vérité.
La mort de l'amour est un véritable enfer vivant.

Serrure loin votre coeur pour éviter le charme de l'amour.
Les mots de roman sont des cendres sur la langue.
La mort de l'amour est un véritable enfer vivant.
Si vous devez, souffrir l'amour tandis que vous êtes jeune.

Les mots de roman sont des cendres sur la langue.
J'espère que c'est une chose que vous apprenez pas de.
Si vous devez, souffrir l'amour tandis que vous êtes jeune.
Priez-vous souffrent pas la mort de l'amour.


Translation:

Pray you suffer not the death of love.
"I love you no more" are words you should fear.
I hope it is a thing you learn not of.
Your heart breaks again with each unshed tear.

"I love you no more" are words you should fear.
Words sink in your soul and tear it apart.
Your heart breaks again with each unshed tear.
Love should be avoided right from the start.

Words sink in your soul and tear it apart.
Your soul embraces winter's bitter cold.
Love should be avoided right from the start.
Love is the cruelest of lies, truth be told.

Your soul embraces winter's bitter cold.
Lock away your heart to avoid love's spell.
Love is the cruelest of lies, truth be told.
The death of love is a true living Hell.

Lock away your heart to avoid love's spell.
Words of romance are ashes on the tongue.
The death of love is a true living Hell.
If you must, suffer love while you are young.

Words of romance are ashes on the tongue.
I hope it is a thing you learn not of.
If you must, suffer love while you are young.
Pray you suffer not the death of love.


©1999 DreamEvil



©1999 DreamEvil
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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


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WhtDove
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1 posted 08-26-99 10:21 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

What did you write this in? French?
These are true words of heartache my friend.
Love may hurt sometimes, but if you close off your heart to that, there is nothing left but ashes. We are all born to love and be loved. I love your writing, don't get me wrong. I think you are very talented. That to me is what life is all about, Love. For God is Love, and we were created in His image.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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2 posted 08-26-99 10:40 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Dream...
This poem is wonderfully written. I take it you are not of the school that it is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.
What a fine example of Pantoum at it's finest!!!
Dragoness
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3 posted 08-26-99 10:42 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

WHoever said to love and lost is better than to have never loved at all never felt the pain of dying love.This was beautiful I loved it.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
pen of passion
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4 posted 08-26-99 11:01 AM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

Mr. Evil, I just had to reply. It was a lovingly sad well-written poem. Aah, this thing about love! I love you no more is good news and bad news, don't you think? True love is found by finding the inner strength to let a bad relationship go. Many teenagers, as well as some adults, do not have that emotional fortitude; therefore that is the reason and the "secret" of suffering. Again, I am you're greatest fan, and that is ...of your writing.
Gentle Soul
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5 posted 08-26-99 12:31 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

this is heartache.. and its beautifully displayed big brother... *hugs* you have such a talent

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Gënt£ë¤§°û£

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 08-26-99 12:41 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DE,
I'm sure you were aware of the controversy
this poem would bring. But you did it anyhow.
A very good pantoun you are a gifted writer.
But a little devil.
wayoutwalt
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since 06-22-99
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7 posted 08-26-99 12:41 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i thought twaas gonna be a western oh well yuh a pleasant surprise twasnt one but no surprise another great poem by dream
tori
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8 posted 08-26-99 01:29 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Ahh again my friend a great Pantoum good work DE. very good..
Poet deVine
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9 posted 08-26-99 01:35 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely poem! It spoke volumes to me - my heart is under lock and key for this very reason!

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DreamEvil
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10 posted 08-26-99 03:06 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Wow!
I had not expected such a response to this one, at least not a favorable one. Thank you, everyone.
caroline
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11 posted 08-26-99 07:41 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This is a very fine work...I truly feel the emotions here. A beautiful job expressing your feelings. (I believe you have expressed mine as well!)

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
doreen peri
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12 posted 08-26-99 07:52 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, and yet again wonderful........ thanks for sharing, DE.
traveler
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13 posted 08-27-99 08:43 AM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

Powerful... moving ... and then one day Love quietly sneaks in and we start again ... I know I'll revisit this poem ... again and again ...thanks for the gift
Sunshine
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14 posted 08-27-99 01:44 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I curtsey, dark master, at your benevolent gift.

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Dark Angel
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15 posted 08-27-99 07:00 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Dream, this was so very moving,A beautiful poem very well written. thank you
~one voice~
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16 posted 08-27-99 07:23 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Oui, oui, oui... C'est tres bien, merci!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Balladeer
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17 posted 08-27-99 07:44 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

In any language this would be an excellent poem but French suits it perfectly.
Andrew Scott
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18 posted 08-27-99 07:52 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Although I prescribe to the "Better to have loved..." philosophy, please count me as a fan of this and many other of your fine offerings. Makes me wish I could speak French.
Verve
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19 posted 08-29-99 10:51 AM       View Profile for Verve   Email Verve   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verve

Dream ...
I am most truly honoured that my situation had inspired such beautiful words from u ...
Maybe something good did come out of the whole episode after all ...
Thank you ...
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