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Ageless Flight |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Ageless Flight My ghosted albatross skies air, Setting a course of who knows where. Away this world and in full gale, Away beyond the abyss it sail. Mutely seeking illusion's den, Searching o'er the forbidden glen, Looking, longing, the slightest gleam, Craving the fragile of my dream. While stars stay a forever night, Horizons seem to ever light. I sail the currents of the day, As sensuous as a ballet. I dance to a passions coup, Of finite light and skies of blue. To countless views that toll my dreams By heavens winds and all it's means. The albatross crests tempest ground. While I lay trussed impotent bound. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The futility of dreams and reality has been phrased very well in this lovely, haunting piece. Well done, Sir! ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, I'll say thank you now before I sink to oblivion. |
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Talon Junior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 33Los Angeles |
Very beautiful poetry and images Tabin, sorry to hear the sad ending though, but it is an attention grabber. Nice work  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Talon, From one T to another I'll say thank you for the read and comment. |
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