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Ageless Flight

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Seymour Tabin
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Ageless Flight

My ghosted albatross skies air,
Setting a course of who knows where.
Away this world and in full gale,
Away beyond the abyss it sail.

Mutely seeking illusion's den,
Searching o'er the forbidden glen,
Looking, longing, the slightest gleam,
Craving the fragile of my dream.

While stars stay a forever night,
Horizons seem to ever light.
I sail the currents of the day,
As sensuous as a ballet.

I dance to a passions coup,
Of finite light and skies of blue.
To countless views that toll my dreams
By heavens winds and all it's means.

The albatross crests tempest ground.
While I lay trussed impotent bound.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-26-99 09:37 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

The futility of dreams and reality has been phrased very well in this lovely, haunting piece. Well done, Sir!

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Seymour Tabin
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Sunshine,
I'll say thank you now before
I sink to oblivion.
Talon
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Very beautiful poetry and images Tabin, sorry to hear the sad ending though, but it is an attention grabber. Nice work
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 08-26-99 03:44 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Talon,
From one T to another
I'll say thank you
for the read and comment.
 
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