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Dark Angel
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0 posted 08-26-99 08:16 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


Antonietta ….
Our souls met a long time ago
We were destined to be together
We were meant to glow!!

In our Mother's Womb
Together as we grew
We had it all worked out…
Me and You

But suddenly I had a fright
As you explained to me
on this warm Autumn night
I had to set you free

No! No! Antonietta
We have so much to give
So much Love, Joy and Peace
Together we Must live!!

So Now…
I find myself without you
In this crazy, mixed up place
If I could only see you
And touch your heavenly face

I know you are near
And watching over me
As you guide me in the right direction
By whispering in my ear.


I miss you Antonietta!!
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pete
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1 posted 08-26-99 09:32 AM       View Profile for pete   Email pete   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for pete

The poem was absolutley moving I loved it it has a lot of feeling
Sunshine
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2 posted 08-26-99 09:41 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I read this piece as if you have lost a twin. Is that the corrent interpretation. It was a sad, well-done piece, as was your intention.

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hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 08-26-99 11:29 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very moving indeed
Dark Angel
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4 posted 08-26-99 04:36 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Petr, thank you so much
Dark Angel
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5 posted 08-26-99 04:36 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Peter, thank you so much
Dark Angel
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6 posted 08-26-99 04:39 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sunshine.....Yes My twin sister was still born. Thanks for you r lovely comment
Dark Angel
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7 posted 08-26-99 04:40 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you hoot
Talon
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8 posted 08-26-99 04:48 PM       View Profile for Talon   Email Talon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Talon

Sounds like you lost your soul-mate. Very nice poem though with nostalgic wistful longing.
caroline
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9 posted 08-26-99 07:35 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

What a lovely poem...you are still together in spirit, I see. Very nice work with an unusual topic.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Dark Angel
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10 posted 08-27-99 12:04 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thanks Talon & Caroline for your lovely comments
DreamEvil
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11 posted 08-27-99 09:21 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

DA,
As you know I lost my twin as well, though I didn't know I had one until I was 26. My heart aches for him and now for you and Antonietta as well.

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12 posted 08-27-99 11:07 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

What a sad, lovely poem. As there is a strong bond between twins, I am sure you have these feelings....excellent! I'm so glad you joined us DarK AngeL!
WhtDove
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13 posted 08-28-99 12:42 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This was a great poem! My sister went through the same thing. One of my nieces was also stillborn. I am sorry to hear that, but as it was put, you are always together in spirit.
Dark Angel
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14 posted 08-29-99 05:15 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you DE, My heart aches for you and your brother as well, and for Antonietta
Dark Angel
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15 posted 08-29-99 05:20 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WhtDove..Thank you. I feel for your sister, as I'm sure I know how she must feel.And yes, we are togetherin Spirit
Dark Angel
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16 posted 08-29-99 05:23 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you so much Poet, I'm so glad that I joined too.Thank yoou for your lovley comment
 
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