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DreamEvil
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0 posted 1999-08-26 02:49 AM


By truth I will arise
from the ashes of the lies
that coat
my honeyed tongue.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



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Dragoness
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1 posted 1999-08-26 02:55 AM


Nicely done.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-08-26 11:55 AM


Not a single wasted word.....short, yet powerful!!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12
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3 posted 1999-08-26 12:03 PM


This is good DE... I like it alot.. hehe.. Im sorta lost for words, I just woke up.. lol

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 1999-08-26 12:15 PM


DE,
This is very very good.
I pat you on the back
This morsel power snack

DreamEvil
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5 posted 1999-08-26 03:01 PM


This one would just NOT leave my head until I put it down. Thank you.
Toerag
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Ala bam a
6 posted 1999-08-26 03:48 PM


I liked it as well.....(And all this time I thought "Wizdom" was the capability of being able to pee accurately?)
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 1999-08-26 04:18 PM


Sixteen little words. Amazing what one can say if they are put in the right order.

Well done, Sir!

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



Talon
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since 1999-08-25
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Los Angeles
8 posted 1999-08-26 04:54 PM


Condensed and thought provoking DreamEvil. Love the formatting too. How do you center the lines?
pen of passion
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since 1999-08-11
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9 posted 1999-08-26 08:56 PM


Truth is beauty. Beauty is truth.
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
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northern mountains, Idaho
10 posted 1999-08-26 09:05 PM


Good tidbit!

[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 08-26-99).]

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
11 posted 1999-08-26 09:08 PM


Hallelujah! The truth does that to ya, nags ya. Glad ya got it down. Lot of meanin!
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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12 posted 1999-08-26 09:11 PM


Puts me in mind of a phoenix. I like!
Alwye
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In the space between moments
13 posted 1999-08-27 12:34 PM


Powerful Dream, very powerful.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller



Balladeer
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14 posted 1999-08-27 01:15 AM


....'would not leave my head until I put it down'....words of a true poet.
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