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The Song

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Verve
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0 posted 08-25-99 09:57 PM       View Profile for Verve   Email Verve   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Verve


The night sighs a lonely tune.
Drumming heavily as raindrops fall in gloom.
Echoing my heart's solitary beat,
Serenading with mournful bliss.
So forlorn did the dark clouds seem,
Like all my hopes, like all my dreams.
The chilly wind churned and swirled
As its icy shroud contracted around me.
This world has crumbled into an abyss,
Where sounds of happines no longer sing
Nor can ever reach.
There is only now the song of Despair crying.
© Copyright 1999 Regina Ng C. L. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-26-99 12:39 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Deeply sad...you did a great job on giving me the sense of great despair. Keep up the exellent work!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


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2 posted 08-26-99 10:49 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I found it at last, my dear. Still as lovely as when first I read it.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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Profound is the word..Good job verve..
Verve
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4 posted 08-27-99 01:34 PM       View Profile for Verve   Email Verve   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verve

Hey all ...

Thanx a million for the wonderful reviews.
I will definitely carry on writing ...

Cheers.
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