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Night, that Chills

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Capulet[R+J]
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Calgary,Alberta Canada


0 posted 08-25-99 07:03 PM       View Profile for Capulet[R+J]   Email Capulet[R+J]   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Capulet[R+J]'s Home Page   View IP for Capulet[R+J]


Hello! Been gone a while, been workin =(

In night, in dark I lay awake,
to memories of my loving sake.
I welcomed winter, and all it told,
to warm myself in your loving hold.

At the kiss of winters breath I chilled,
at your loving tough my life stood still.
In frozen night, my tears fell hard,
to your loving words, the frozen part.
To memories of what I welcomed then,
I cry these tears at memories end.

In winters night, my body chills,
in the cold of snow, the frozen kills.
Memories last, of the day I was weak,
when your love was at end, and your love
is what I seek.

To the day you told me things do change,
are now the only words I hear you say.
True love will never come to end,
the love I know you can not send.
So hear I sit and pray to thee,
to send this one time love to me.



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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..
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Alwye
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In the space between moments


1 posted 08-26-99 01:49 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautifully sad, Capulet. I certainly felt the pain in this piece. Great work!!

Pssst- Check your mail.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


Dragoness
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2 posted 08-26-99 04:03 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Beautiful,loved it! Welcome Back!!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
Capulet[R+J]
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since 08-07-99
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Calgary,Alberta Canada


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Hello Just a quick note, I mis-spelled
a line here. It should be
'at your loving touch' not 'loving tough'
Thankyou for the kind words, and the welcome!

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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..
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