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True Sound of Silence

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Ladycat
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0 posted 08-25-99 04:14 PM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

Silent pictures
Painted on silent walls
Silent people
Down silent halls
Silent thoughts
Silent dreams
Silent sunlight
Cast silent raybeams
Silent life
We silently live
Silent kisses
We silently give
Silent hearts
Silent minds
Silent guys
Who are silent and blind
Silence comes
Silence goes
I breath the silence
Through my nose
Silent room
Silent me
Silence here
To always be


Love,
Lady
I couldn't tell you how this came to my mind..
Look everyone.. It rhymes..



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Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


© Copyright 1999 Vynette M. Charles-Brooks - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-25-99 05:07 PM       View Profile for skysight   Email skysight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for skysight

Behold my silent reply: I like how you emphasize various things in daily life, but you don't seem to elaborate on them much. Still, the message is yours and yours alone, and the only opinion that truly matters is yours.
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2 posted 08-25-99 05:20 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

'Tis a true delight to find you once more in these pages of verse. Well done my dear.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvilŠ


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3 posted 08-25-99 09:50 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Shhhhhhhh.....
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4 posted 08-25-99 09:57 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Simply lovely! Such a purity of thought here! I loved this! You don't need to elaborate on anything!
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5 posted 08-25-99 10:00 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

You did just fine, Ladycat. Silent but deadly
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6 posted 08-26-99 01:56 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Simon and Garfunkel have nothing on you. The pain that you put forth in this hit me solidly in the chest. Welldone.

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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7 posted 08-26-99 02:31 PM       View Profile for Mona Lisa   Email Mona Lisa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mona Lisa

I like this. It makes you think of something we dont tend to think of and that is silence.

I especially like the line, "I breathe silence through my nose" Don't ask me why, but that line stuck with me. Seeing as breathing is so vital to our existence, but yet seems so silent and insignificant sometimes.

Thank you for making me think.
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8 posted 08-26-99 03:22 PM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

Thank you all.. I have learned that writing on the fly works wonders.. I'm glad that all of you liked the piece so much.. I never expected for anyone to like it..
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9 posted 08-26-99 03:32 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

it doth rhyme and has alotto merit i like the use you put into the word silent was very clever
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