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Loranth
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since 08-24-99
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0 posted 08-25-99 12:34 PM       View Profile for Loranth   Email Loranth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Loranth

Hardly a moment passes
When I don't think of you.
I can see you clearly
In my mind.

The way you look,
The way you feel,
The way you smell,
The way you taste on my lips.

My need and desire for you
Grows with each passing day.
My need to be loved,
My desire to love somebody.

I'd give up everything I have
Just to hold you in my arms.
I would walk a thousand miles to kiss your lips.
I would slay the mightiest armies to keep you safe.

You are everything to me.
My love for you is true.
My love for you is eternal.
You complete my soul.

You are the half that i lack.
You are the part of me that was missing.
You make me whole everytime we are together.
If i have to wait a million years for you, I will.

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If poetry is a reflection of what is in a person's soul, then I am afraid of what is inside of me.
© Copyright 1999 Loranth - All Rights Reserved
INclan
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since 07-20-99
Posts 1046
Indiana, USA


1 posted 08-25-99 02:23 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Well done. I have be blessed to have met more than one soul in my life to which this poem applies. Thank you for posting this.

INclan
swan
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since 07-19-99
Posts 58
california, usa


2 posted 08-25-99 03:01 PM       View Profile for swan   Email swan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for swan

this is amazing! it expresses so much feeling and it's so clear.great writing!
Swan

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"I can't go on like this is not a way of telling you'll be mine. Be mine. Like I was walking on your blue carpet. Or am I just being foolish? Or am I just being hopefully yours?" Stina Nordenstam


swan
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since 07-19-99
Posts 58
california, usa


3 posted 08-25-99 03:01 PM       View Profile for swan   Email swan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for swan

this is amazing! it expresses so much feeling and it's so clear.great writing!
Swan

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"I can't go on like this is not a way of telling you'll be mine. Be mine. Like I was walking on your blue carpet. Or am I just being foolish? Or am I just being hopefully yours?" Stina Nordenstam


 
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