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Muse, Music and Colors
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Muse, Music and Colors |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Muse, Music and Colors In the wee early hours between two and three, my Muse came a’tiptoeing into my dream. She brought with her Music and Colors by name and began to play a very unusual game. “Good morrow” spoke Muse, uncapping her wand, “I’m here to show you things from the great beyond.” In detail then appeared in my dream’s misty haze a scene from which I couldn’t unlock my gaze. Without further word Muse beckoned, and the dancing began, Red and Orange erupted into a wild and colorful can-can, Yellow then swirled and spun in to Music’s delight, joined Amber and became a most beautiful sight. Lavender began a-twirling, and lacy Cream gave a glance as Black and White swayed together, locked in a lover’s dance. Pink strolled the ballroom floor, looking lovely and fine, Gray came promptly along and paired up with Wine. Soon Purple and Gold waltzed to a slow Ballad’s tune, Greens and Blues twirled to a lovely, mystical rune, then slowly Music became soulful, softly fading away all of the colors coming together in one massive sway. Luminescence filled the ballroom’s parquet floor Iridescent colors all pleading “Please, one dance more!” Twilight’s shadow now looking for Morning’s first ray all colors coming to a slow halt before the new day. The couplets became quadruplets, Music fades to quiet, as they all began to stroll back into the late night, Music still lingered sweetly on in my dream As Sun stood waiting for Moon’s last silvery beam. This story it seems, shall never really end for someone’s Muse shall pick up that Muse’s pen and will then take Music and Colors by name and begin this wonderful Dance all over again. 25 August, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was beautiful Sunshine! I love how you got all the colors in there! What a rainbow! This was just neat!  (2 smiles up) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you. I felt as if I had been in the middle of a modern version of Disney's "Fantasia," for this is a true account of just last night's dream! ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A true fantasia that brought me to my feet, bravo a wonderful piece. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
A beautiful bouquet of sights and sounds. Thank you for the wonderful picture you painted. Most enjoyable. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So beautiful...with all the colors..simply lovely work. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all. It literally came to me at 2:00 a.m. Wednesday morning! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is one of newest very favorite poems in PiP. Wow. It is incredible. A |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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