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Longing

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Loranth
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0 posted 08-25-99 12:15 PM       View Profile for Loranth   Email Loranth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Loranth

I wake up alone
Seeing nothing next to me.
I thinks as i do every day,
That my bed is too big for me alone.

I miss having you next to me,
To feel your body against mine.
I long to feel your touch and
Smell your hair.

I miss the way you laugh,
The smile on your face.
Hardly a day goes by without
Me thinking of you.

Love is a bond that can never
Be severed by mere mortals.
Only God can undo what he makes,
And he has yet to unmake my love for you.

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If poetry is a reflection of what is in a person's soul, then I am afraid of what is inside of me.
© Copyright 1999 Loranth - All Rights Reserved
swan
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since 07-19-99
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california, usa


1 posted 08-25-99 03:05 PM       View Profile for swan   Email swan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for swan

beautiful!
Swan

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"I can't go on like this is not a way of telling you'll be mine. Be mine. Like I was walking on your blue carpet. Or am I just being foolish? Or am I just being hopefully yours?" Stina Nordenstam


Skyfyre
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since 08-15-99
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


2 posted 08-25-99 10:25 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Welcome, Loranth ...

This poem is exactly what I feel for my love, every morning when I wake ... how did you manage to read my mind..?

Hope you won't mind if I ask him to read it too ...

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

Alwye
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In the space between moments


3 posted 08-26-99 12:45 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful work, welcome aboard, Loranth!! I can't wait for more!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


traveler
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4 posted 08-26-99 09:06 AM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

A wonderful poem .. reminding me of that moment in the morning ..as the dreams fade ... and if I lay very still... I can almost feel her presence or smell her hair ... very moving ...thank you

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hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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5 posted 08-26-99 09:11 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautifully written...welcome to the forum, looking forward to more

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
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on the threshold of a dream


6 posted 08-26-99 09:34 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful poem... welcome!
Loranth
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since 08-24-99
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7 posted 08-26-99 09:54 AM       View Profile for Loranth   Email Loranth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Loranth

this isn't my normal fare, but it seems to be getting good reactions, so i shall work on writing a few more like this. thanks for your output everybody.

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If poetry is a reflection of what is in a person's soul, then I am afraid of what is inside of me.
 
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