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WhtDove
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0 posted 1999-08-25 10:05 AM


Lord, I'd like to take a moment,
And thank you for Your love.
And I'd really like to thank You,
For Your guidance from Above.
I want to truly thank You,
For the friends You've sent my way.
Their helpfulness and caring,
They show each and every day.
It truly is a blessing,
Those You've sent across my path.
The time they've spent just caring,
And being there to make me laugh.
For I may not know their faces,
Or even where they live.
But You know I couldn't of done it,
Without the love they give.
So I wanted to say Thank You
For my burdens that You bare,
And sending all those friends to me
To show me that You care!

© Copyright 1999 WhtDove - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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1 posted 1999-08-25 10:08 AM


Whitedove....that was really pretty....I don't get very serious often, (gee, guess you'd have to have an amazing perception for the obvious to have noticed), but this was really nice!!!
wayoutwalt
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2 posted 1999-08-25 10:12 AM


as good toerag astutely sayeth this poem is very pretty and astutely i shall say that it is a smile on my face sharing it with you in my mind thanx
WhtDove
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3 posted 1999-08-25 10:19 AM


Thanks you guys! I appreciate this more than you know!
DreamEvil
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4 posted 1999-08-25 10:21 AM


Dear Lady, this is a very moving tribute to the Lord. Well done indeed and thank you.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



WhtDove
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5 posted 1999-08-25 10:32 AM


Well, Dream, I need to thank you. You are one of those caring friends He has sent across my path! Don't know what I would of done without ya!
WhtDove
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6 posted 1999-08-25 10:50 PM


Thought I'd bring this around once more. To let the others read...
Gentle Soul
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7 posted 1999-08-26 12:13 PM


this is beautiful WhtDove.. Im sorry I have been replying to youre poetry lately... it doesnt mean I lost interest in it.. just, havent been in much of a replying mood but I still love your work!

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8 posted 1999-08-26 12:25 PM


Thank you for taking the moment. *S* Very nice!
traveler
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9 posted 1999-08-27 09:03 AM


Simply lovely ...how much we will miss in life if we don't note the simple things... like the gift of friendship ... thank you
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10 posted 2011-02-20 02:25 AM


I think that I'll just "bring this around" one more time.  I understand the thanks for the friendship and how much these friendships impact our lives.  I also give thanks, but WhtDove said it far more eloquently than I could.

Alison

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2011-02-20 06:42 AM


Every word~~so true.

M

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