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Open Poetry #1

Forgive the fall...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-08-25 01:14 AM

Forgive the fall for falling leaves
And do not judge it with a stare
We are alike in our beliefs
We find warmth in being bare

Forgive the fall for rainy weather
God, save us both from being shallow
With our beliefs we stand together
That once we leave, the spring will follow

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

1 posted 1999-08-25 03:09 AM

let me know what you think

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I fell in love and kept on falling

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-08-25 10:57 AM

I'm not sure why no one else has replied to this as I liked it a lot.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 1999-08-25 06:10 PM

Thank Hoot_owl_rn! I'm glad you liked it.

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I fell in love and kept on falling

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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4 posted 1999-08-25 06:46 PM

I like this too

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

pen of passion
Member

since 1999-08-11

Posts 234

5 posted 1999-08-25 09:28 PM

I liked it too.

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

6 posted 1999-08-26 11:46 AM

Thanks for your comments!

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I fell in love and kept on falling

tori
Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

7 posted 2000-01-22 01:27 PM

Master I found this one .. and I found it very enjoyable..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-04-17 01:23 PM

a good piece for the upcoming season

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2005-08-23 01:09 AM

A good read as we approach the change of another season. Missing your writing under any name.

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