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Forgive the fall...

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Master
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0 posted 08-25-99 01:14 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Forgive the fall for falling leaves
And do not judge it with a stare
We are alike in our beliefs
We find warmth in being bare

Forgive the fall for rainy weather
God, save us both from being shallow
With our beliefs we stand together
That once we leave, the spring will follow
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Master
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1 posted 08-25-99 03:09 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

let me know what you think

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I fell in love and kept on falling
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 08-25-99 10:57 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I'm not sure why no one else has replied to this as I liked it a lot.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Master
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3 posted 08-25-99 06:10 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank Hoot_owl_rn! I'm glad you liked it.

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I fell in love and kept on falling
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I like this too

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5 posted 08-25-99 09:28 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

I liked it too.
Master
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Thanks for your comments!

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I fell in love and kept on falling
tori
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Master I found this one .. and I found it very enjoyable..
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a good piece for the upcoming season
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9 posted 08-23-2005 01:09 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

A good read as we approach the change of another season.  Missing your writing under any name.
 
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