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Summer (written by my 15 year old son.)

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Lorelei54
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0 posted 08-24-99 08:27 PM       View Profile for Lorelei54   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lorelei54

Ah, summer
We're finally there.
The scent of love is
Drifting through the air.
A time for joy.
Being with those you adore.
A time for affection
You never had before.
A chance-
to fulfill your desire.
A chance-
to feed the fire.
Savor it while you can
for when the summer is done
it is time to say goodbye.
So keep in touch
because next summer
it's a -
time...
chance...
for love.


beautiful huh? smiling proudly!!! (by mom)


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Poet deVine
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1 posted 08-24-99 09:25 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wonderful poem! That about sums up summer all right! Is this his first poem? It's good..now you'll have to share time with him so he can post on the Teen Forum!
WhtDove
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2 posted 08-24-99 09:28 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This was good!
LngJhnAg
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3 posted 08-26-99 04:57 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

take it easy, Ladies... he is as sweet and humble as they come, and you'll chase him away with your tigress ways. It would do him a world of good to come here and learn some of the trade. I think he has some potential, but he's pretty quiet.
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I don't believe I have 'tigress' ways sir! But tell him, if he ever wants someone to talk to, he can contact Ryan, the moderator of the teen forum (thought I was going to suggest me?).
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He has a great start there. I started writing young. Send my compliments to him and if he likes writing, get him into creative writing class.

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*shadowy-one*
 
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