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Incognito Love

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jfreak
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since 06-17-99
Posts 311
Yuma, AZ, USA


0 posted 08-24-99 08:06 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jfreak

Dusk after Dusk
Through that rusted gate
Crawled a heartsick love
He knew only one passion.
She was his life, breath, heart.
His pure white, ivory, dove.
A mere bench in a forgotten garden
Was the point of their rendezvous
to which these two love's hearts collided
Sweet nothings whispered in the dew
Eyes and ears absorbing every detail
Two Souls in which everything was confided

He was her dream, reality, hope
Her every wish come true
A gentle gatekeeper of the treasure of her soul
She longed for him
He longed for her
Two halves that made a whole
A secret love, there is no sweeter
No tender and fulfilling love
than the one that is incognito
which shows all the lengths and depths,
the mountains climbed and oceans swum
The test of the true love between
A fair lady and an honorable fellow.
© Copyright 1999 jfreak - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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since 05-20-99
Posts 24426
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA


1 posted 08-27-99 12:35 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

jfreak - I take a day or two to do some personal stuff - and you try to sneak this lovely gem by me - You can't escape my discerning eye that easily - I like this one -

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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ 1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75


jfreak
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2 posted 08-28-99 03:32 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Again, inspired by the timeless classic,
Les Miserables. This is about Cosette and Marius. I just wanted to write something about them. In my opinion one of the greatest couples in classic literature. Right next to Romeo and Juliet if not beyond them. That is just my opinion though. Thanks for your words.

Jfreak
IsabelleSkye
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since 06-27-99
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3 posted 08-28-99 10:32 AM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

I have been neglecting you my dear friend.
This was lovely, and your painting with words has come a long ways since last year.
*Beaming Proudly*
Beautiful, just beautiful
Izzy

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God is really only another artist. He invented the giraffe, the elephant and the cat. He has no real style, He just goes on trying other things.
- Pablo Picasso
Seymour Tabin
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since 07-07-99
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Tamarac Fla


4 posted 08-28-99 07:36 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

jfreak,
You freaked me out.
A wondrful poem
Colin
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since 06-05-99
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Callington, Cornwall, England


5 posted 08-29-99 02:48 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

*round of applause*
THAT there poem was jaw-dropping stuff *8)
It's... It's.... ok, he says as he thinks how to describe this poem....
It's wonderful! A subject close to my own heart handled very delicately. Nice *8)

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I believe in fairy tales but then I'm just a silly romantic, what do I know?
jfreak
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Posts 311
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6 posted 08-30-99 01:53 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Thank you all for your inspiring words. Izzy what are you talking about, "I've come so far since last year"? What is that about? I just ask b/c I don't recall getting any critical critques from you. But Thanks anyway. I hope I have grown. I was getting a little discouraged with this one b/c I took several days before anyone commented and I thought that I had done really well with this poem. I guess patience is a virtue though. Again thank you all for your kind words.

Jreak
IsabelleSkye
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7 posted 08-30-99 08:26 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

*sigh*
you don't know me????
I guess it's cuz the halo is gone!
Think...another time, another place, your SIS????
huh!
shows how much I mean LOL
Luv Your X friend
*wink*
*nudge*

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God is really only another artist. He invented the giraffe, the elephant and the cat. He has no real style, He just goes on trying other things.
- Pablo Picasso
jfreak
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8 posted 08-31-99 02:45 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Hey there my angel,

How dare you change your name on me. Then not reveal to me your secret identity. You know I love your stuff. Well I will definately be looking for you more. I was wondering why I hadn't seen you on here. Now I know. I was like, I guess she didn't defect with the rest of us. But now the mystery is complete and I know what you mean by the growth now. You knew my work when I was first really branching out. The compliment is even greater now. Thank you.

jfreak
Poet deVine
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9 posted 08-31-99 07:14 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful! "gatekeeper of the treasure of her soul"..great phrase! This definitely is romantic.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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10 posted 08-31-99 09:57 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

An extreamly romantic poetic piece you've done here. I really enjoyed it, thanks so much for sharing.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
 
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