Listening to every heart
Critique My Grammar, Please!
Well, Sunshine, she’s done stepped in it again
by allowing out her non-poisonous pen,
she’s permitted her teachings to be her undoing
and now she’s received quite an A-- chewing.
“Are we looking in Critical Analysis?”
came the lowly sound of someone’s hiss;
“who cares for punctuation, or spelling for that matter
we can all go around acting like the Mad Hatter!”
“Sigh” sounds Sunshine, “now everyone thinks I’m mean,
and if not that, then they must think me a machine…
why, I’ve got faults, heck, I’ve put them out to be read,
and now everyone must think I’ve got bats in my head.”
So poets beware, Sunshine’s pen’s been put away
and from now on, in Open Forum, she will only say,
"that only nice comments will henceforth be seen"
but in C. A., she’ll be a nightmare’s dream!
24 August, 1999
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow