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An Angelís Chance

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An Angelís Chance
[In response to LngJhnAgís ďAngelsĒ]

A friend came to me the other day,
at his words my heart broke for him.
So for this man, I wrote these words
for Iíd like to see him try love again.

To step softly around a broken heart
takes some work, as 'tis an art
to mend the broken, repair the wound
but pray dear friend, you'll mend soon.

Divorce I learned is a little death
swiftly come, takes one's breath;
but star-crossed lovers, different, yes
for two then joined in love's caress.

Since for them by ring they were not bound
one gets what one gives, is what I've found;
but a ring doesn't always mean forever in life,
when man meets woman, becomes husband and wife.

Sometimes it is in one's soul,
to grow as ďoneĒ becomes the goal,
and my friend, 'tis for you to again cope;
that you'll learn to love again,
and be a real angel's hope.


24 August, 1999
©KRJ



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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
Starith
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It is very sweet of you to write this poem for your friend...I hope also that your friend learns to love again...
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This is sweet!
pen of passion
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Ah... love, go figure. Sweet poem.
Seymour Tabin
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Sunshine,
your warmth will make him well again.
Sunshine
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Thanks everyone, but it was LJA who inspired the work!
Alwye
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Beautifully sweet, Sunshine.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


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