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To hell i go

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The Jackal
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0 posted 08-24-99 02:08 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

to hell i go lets watch the flow,
of things i deserve,
making me squirm,
you can laugh though,
as i burn in misery,
as you sit up high,
an angel in disguise,
spare a thought for me,
what if the fires do burn out,
will you add fire to the flames,
god knows i deserve it,
for the pain i put you threw,
so laugh at me,scream at me,
spit on me, torture me,
blind me,
just dont ever forgive me,
burn me to the highest core,
then let death take its toll,
scum of the earth,
loves arch-enemy,
was there ever a end to my deceit,
I never could admit defeat

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Loranth
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1 posted 08-25-99 11:09 AM       View Profile for Loranth   Email Loranth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Loranth

this is a very sobering piece of work in my mind. did something happen between you and the one you love to write this anthem of self hatred? i hope that i never feel like this.

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2 posted 02-11-2002 06:46 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

whoa...something really ticked u off!
I hope all is well with you
 
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