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Open Poetry #1

To hell i go

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-08-24 02:08 PM

to hell i go lets watch the flow,
of things i deserve,
making me squirm,
you can laugh though,
as i burn in misery,
as you sit up high,
an angel in disguise,
spare a thought for me,
what if the fires do burn out,
will you add fire to the flames,
god knows i deserve it,
for the pain i put you threw,
so laugh at me,scream at me,
spit on me, torture me,
blind me,
just dont ever forgive me,
burn me to the highest core,
then let death take its toll,
scum of the earth,
loves arch-enemy,
was there ever a end to my deceit,
I never could admit defeat

Loranth
Junior Member

since 1999-08-24

Posts 19

1 posted 1999-08-25 11:09 AM

this is a very sobering piece of work in my mind. did something happen between you and the one you love to write this anthem of self hatred? i hope that i never feel like this.

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If poetry is a reflection of what is in a person's soul, then I am afraid of what is inside of me.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-02-11 06:46 PM

whoa...something really ticked u off!
I hope all is well with you

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