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First Night (for her)

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Primus Nocti
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0 posted 08-24-99 12:42 PM       View Profile for Primus Nocti   Email Primus Nocti   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Primus Nocti

The sunset frames her mahogany hair.
Mischief sparkles from eyes of azure blue.
Her heady scent rides on crisp morning air.
Milky white skin is touched by pastel hue.

Tender care brushes the hair from her cheek.
My eyes caress every swell of her breast.
I was caught by her feminine mystique.
Just a smile from her makes me feel blessed.

Pouting lips part now ever so slightly.
Her body displays God's most gentle curves.
My aching soul longs to hold her tightly.
I strive hard to be the man she deserves.

Romancing this angel must be done right.
Now and forever I am her First Night.

1999 Primus Nocti




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1 posted 08-24-99 05:01 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Breathtaking! Very, very romantic and the imagery is wonderful.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
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*sigh*... this is beautiful, thanks Primus:-)
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Beautiful! A lovely, loving poem. Welcome to the forum! I look forward to reading more of your work.
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So very romantic....beautiful work.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


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A wonderful knight in shining amor.
Primus Nocti
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6 posted 08-25-99 08:44 AM       View Profile for Primus Nocti   Email Primus Nocti   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Primus Nocti

Thank you.
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