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To My Husband, Now and Always
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To My Husband, Now and Always |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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To My Husband, Now and Always You really do not know what you mean to me, how I value your love, your trust, your integrity. When I first met you, we were at arm’s length, I was mixed up, confused, you were a tower of strength. Time went by, we quickly fell “in like” a lot; love followed swiftly, then a date set, a ring bought. We have literally been through thick and thin, and with you, I would do it all over again. Of course we have our vast and changing differences, but as a pair we are great, and we quickly mend torn fences. I’m complex, you’re informed, that’s what I like about you, nothing really keeps us apart, we make a splendid duo. I can start a sentence, you can and do finish it just fine; do we have shared ESP, or simply one collective mind? You have a talent for visual art, I’m somewhat into poetry; at this, I really like what you do, but you have no insight of me. So to the ‘net I’ve gone, to share my mind in words, and sometimes I have to get beyond what you call “just absurd.” But that’s all right, as I understand wicked Jealousy’s wink ‘cause darling, you have my soul, the Forum just makes me think. 24 August, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
You've brought a big smile to my face, again. I hope he liked it as much as I did. Two halfs do make a whole. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Isn't he the one who wrote You are my Sunshine? Wonderful poem. |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
sonds like you have a sweet relationship...I count my blessings too..shame I can't write such poetry to show it like you do! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Traveler, keep smiling! More to come. Seymour, he doesn't have a rhyming bone in his body. Lorelei, practice, practice, practice. Thank you all for your comments! ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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