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Tim
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0 posted 08-24-99 09:45 AM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tim

I seek in my tomorrows
...memories of today,
To lose my pain and sorrows
...and smell life's sweet bouquet,
I'll once again feel summer rain
...fall from the skies above,
Hold you gently in my arms
...and whisper words of love,
On the winds a madrigal
...brings forth the songs of spring,
In pathless woods mine pleasure seek,
...the joys to me you bring,
I journey through the wall of tears
...to sunlit days and soothing clime,
I seek mirage of love gone by,
...I drift on River Time.
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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)


1 posted 08-24-99 09:48 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

o this is soo cool needed a smilin face and yuh gave it to me thanx
Poet deVine
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2 posted 08-24-99 10:22 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Perfect! You are so good! This has to rank up there with your best, my friend, it's just lovely!
Tim
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3 posted 08-24-99 06:27 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tim

Thank you Walt... glad you enjoyed it.
thx Poet deVine
Nan
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4 posted 08-27-99 12:31 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

As I started to read this, I didn't think you'd be able to outdo the opening line - Then every one you wrote was better than the last...Awesome, my friend..

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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ 1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75


Tim
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5 posted 08-27-99 05:44 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tim

Thank you for your kind comment Nan...


[This message has been edited by Tim (edited 08-27-99).]
Denise
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6 posted 08-28-99 10:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Absolutely breathtaking! I loved it.
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