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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-08-24 09:25 AM

Confession is today

I confess
To intensity
To jealous alarm
Insecurity
And major qualm.

I confess
To dull neglect
To hellish fear
To no respect.
And a quiet tear.

I confess
To being annoyed
And less then droll
Doubt and void.
And loss of soul.

I confess
To bad report
Odious cliché
Being out of sort
And poor display.

And If I missed, an unsaid do,
Then I confess to that one too.

pen of passion
Member

since 1999-08-11

Posts 234

1 posted 1999-08-24 09:31 AM

You're forgiven. Your poetry is a blessing.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 1999-08-27 12:17 PM

Just keep on writing - You're allowed nearly any transgression if you do......

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 1999-08-27 12:25 PM

confession is good for the soul, yes. great writing, I'm enjoying too.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

4 posted 1999-08-27 12:36 PM

LOL.....I like that!!!

traveler
Member

since 1999-08-17

Posts 119

5 posted 1999-08-27 06:08 PM

BRAVO ...smile ... just thinking i keep confessing to the same things over and over ...

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

6 posted 1999-08-27 06:13 PM

and, my child... how long HAS it been since your last confession? Tell me everything that's transpired... out with it now...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 1999-08-28 08:25 AM

Traveler and LngJhnAg.
My last confession is in my new and last post
Hero's and old gey mares. Thanks for the comments.

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

8 posted 1999-08-28 02:53 PM

Delightful.

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 1999-08-28 06:24 PM

Great job, Seymour!!!

traveler
Member

since 1999-08-17

Posts 119

10 posted 1999-08-28 11:17 PM

Bless me Father for I have sinned ... that will be 10 Our Fathers and 10 Hail Marys ... don't matter what you've done or your intent ... thanks, Seymore ...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 1999-08-29 08:29 AM

Seymoour,This was an enjoyable read. Thank you

Wolfgang
Member

since 1999-05-24

Posts 124
Hamilton, Ont. Canada

12 posted 1999-08-29 11:09 AM

I should be right along there with you:-)
A good one for sure!

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