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it feels good to feel bad

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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 08-24-99 04:18 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

the taste of blood on my tongue
from sharp words that i swallow
it feels good to feel bad
it feels good when I wallow

it feels good to feel pity
if its directed within
there's nothing like self loathing
helps me pick up the pen

inspiration can be found
inside this familiar place
when there is nothing but hurt
there is nothing to face

its all wrapped up quite neatly
inside how deep it is sad
and it's not difficult to say
it feels good to feel bad


© Copyright 1999 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 08-24-99 04:24 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

LOLOL

How totally true walt! The second stanza especially rings of truth. You are fantastic when you're Dark. I wish you would step into the shadows more often.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 08-24-99 12:30 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Wayoutwalt,
Enjoyed the read.
Saxoness
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3 posted 08-24-99 06:43 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Walt, I'm back, and delighted to see a piece from you. Good job, and drop me a note, ok?

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Alwye
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4 posted 08-24-99 10:07 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Nicely dark piece...I like my share of darkness, and this was a good one...

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


Toerag
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5 posted 08-25-99 07:51 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Well done Walt....If I didn't feel sorry for myself, I'd be really lonely yanno?....LOL
Loranth
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6 posted 08-25-99 10:40 AM       View Profile for Loranth   Email Loranth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Loranth

walt you have truly captured the essence that allows many of us to write that which we do, me especially. i find that i write my best stuff when there is anger welling inside of me, or when i am caught up in the throuhs of depression. very well done sir.

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If poetry is a reflection of what is in a person's soul, then I am afraid of what is inside of me.
cruz
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7 posted 10-29-2000 01:33 AM       View Profile for cruz   Email cruz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cruz

Good choice of words.  This seems to have a lot more to it than meets the eye.  Inform me
later
 
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