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Children's Vices

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Blondie
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0 posted 08-23-99 08:22 PM       View Profile for Blondie   Email Blondie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Blondie

This one's thick
That one's thin
Verna is lisping
Kerril has stutters
Jane plucks hair
Carrie chews locks
Lynne eats boogers
Margel gnaws pencils
Till they're gone
Laurril bites fingers
Towards bloody pulp
Juniper's thick tangles
They're never combed
Allie's raggedy clothes
Are worn apart
Casey wildly dances
Over wish bridges
She can't stop -----
That idiotic smile
Pasted upon lips
Ileena daydreams
Staring at clocks
Maisey eats snacks
Out garbage cans
Linnee hides away
In potty rooms
Calli wears doll things
Covering her blood
One's too womanly
One's too immature
They're too old
For their vices
Teachers hate them
In school rooms
Children murder them
Within play yards
They wander home
Under days ends
Knowing what comes
They mustn't tell
They're all neglected
They're all abused
They're too old -----
For their vices
No one cares
They're already -----
TWELVE.

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Delores Hall
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1 posted 08-23-99 11:35 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

This is weird.
Blondie
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2 posted 08-24-99 08:47 AM       View Profile for Blondie   Email Blondie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blondie

Meant to make you think, and whatever you get out of it will be your decision of what it's about. I won't tell you what I meant when I wrote it.
Missy F
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3 posted 08-24-99 09:28 PM       View Profile for Missy F   Email Missy F   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Missy F

Weird poem...makes you wonder, but I have a feeling I know why you wrote it.
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