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bleeding heart
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since 08-23-99
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0 posted 08-23-99 07:01 PM       View Profile for bleeding heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bleeding heart

as i sit here drowning
in sorrow
I can't
help wonder
what went wrong
all we do
is argue
and fight
especailly when
I want to leave
you say you love
that you want me
to stay
but what if I
don't care
about you
anymore is
the wisper
in my heart
all I can see
is the pain
Ive caused
I still
love you
but not what
you've become
so in my
sorrow I
wonder.....

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I lay here waiting with my bleeding heart.
© Copyright 1999 bleeding heart - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 08-23-99 11:50 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is the third poem of yours that I've read tonight. You must be in a lot of pain. Poetry is good for you - helps you begin to heal!
DreamEvil
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2 posted 08-24-99 03:41 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Poetry is indeed good for the soul. If you are blinded by pain, perhaps it also clouds your perception of what he has become. Could it not be a reflection of what you fear to become? Just a thought.

Free verse isn't my thing, this cried out for a response however.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvilŠ


 
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