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bleeding heart New Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 8virginia minnesota USA |
as i sit here drowning in sorrow I can't help wonder what went wrong all we do is argue and fight especailly when I want to leave you say you love that you want me to stay but what if I don't care about you anymore is the wisper in my heart all I can see is the pain Ive caused I still love you but not what you've become so in my sorrow I wonder..... ------------------ I lay here waiting with my bleeding heart. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is the third poem of yours that I've read tonight. You must be in a lot of pain. Poetry is good for you - helps you begin to heal! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Poetry is indeed good for the soul. If you are blinded by pain, perhaps it also clouds your perception of what he has become. Could it not be a reflection of what you fear to become? Just a thought. Free verse isn't my thing, this cried out for a response however. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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