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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-08-23 03:36 PM


isnt death the only predator,
you cant escape,
joked the sheriff,
he just killed a 17 year old,
his crime was never told,
but we must believe the good,
the law abiding breed,
a menace to society ,
his guilt was never freed,
so its my creed,
my bloodthirsty friends,
to bring justice to the field,
and around this dead horse ill lead,
awareness and greed



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Elizabeth
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1 posted 1999-08-23 03:42 PM


I'm a little confused-is it about someone who was killed for no apparent reason? I'd rather wait to comment more till I've got it straight.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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