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Untitled (My first online poem!)
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Untitled (My first online poem!) |
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skinnerbox New Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 1Fort Worth, Texas, USA |
As I woke up this morning, I missed you; Needing to feel your sweet caresses and good morning kiss. As I got in the shower, I missed you; Wishing that you were there so that we could scrub each other's backs. As I stood at the sink shaving, I missed you; Longing to see your reflection in the mirror behind me. As I drove to the office, I missed you; Wanting to reach over and tuck your hair behind your ears the way I always do in the car. As I sit at my desk writing this, I miss you; Knowing that it will be hours before my day is once again brightened by your presence. ------------------ Bobby |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Bobby, yanno, you gotta get that lazy gal outta bed in the morning. Sh'e probably laying around the house eating bon bons, and thinking the same thing about you. |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Excellent first effort Bobby. I must admit I was waiting for a tragic end where you surprise us with details of how she died in a tragic pita bread mishap...2 thumbs up. PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://www.stormloader.com/poetwheel/den.html ICQ: 44370408 |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Sincere, and it read well. I like.  ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Nice love letter, hope you gave it to her! |
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