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Untitled (My first online poem!)

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skinnerbox
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since 08-23-99
Posts 1
Fort Worth, Texas, USA


0 posted 08-23-99 02:57 PM       View Profile for skinnerbox   Email skinnerbox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skinnerbox's Home Page   View IP for skinnerbox

As I woke up this morning,
I missed you;
Needing to feel your sweet caresses and good
morning kiss.

As I got in the shower,
I missed you;
Wishing that you were there so that we could
scrub each other's backs.

As I stood at the sink shaving,
I missed you;
Longing to see your reflection in the mirror
behind me.

As I drove to the office,
I missed you;
Wanting to reach over and tuck your hair
behind your ears the way I always do in the
car.

As I sit at my desk writing this,
I miss you;
Knowing that it will be hours before my day
is once again brightened by your presence.



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Bobby
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LngJhnAg
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since 07-23-99
Posts 3654
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


1 posted 08-23-99 03:34 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Bobby, yanno, you gotta get that lazy gal outta bed in the morning. Sh'e probably laying around the house eating bon bons, and thinking the same thing about you.
Poetwheel
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since 07-07-99
Posts 215
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2 posted 08-23-99 08:11 PM       View Profile for Poetwheel   Email Poetwheel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poetwheel's Home Page   View IP for Poetwheel

Excellent first effort Bobby. I must admit I was waiting for a tragic end where you surprise us with details of how she died in a tragic pita bread mishap...2 thumbs up.

PW

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Skyfyre
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since 08-15-99
Posts 1966
Sitting in Michael's Lap


3 posted 08-23-99 08:45 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Sincere, and it read well. I like.

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

redwriter1
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since 07-22-99
Posts 476
Franklin, TN


4 posted 08-23-99 10:31 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

Nice love letter, hope you gave it to her!
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