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Winter-a paradelle

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-23-99 02:52 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Night is cold and lonely
Night is cold and lonely
Still the tempest does turn
Still the tempest does turn
Cold tempest is still night
and turn does the lonely.

Sparkles of ice glitter
Sparkles of ice glitter
Cloudy breath floats away
Cloudy breath floats away
Breath of cloudy sparkles
away ice breath glitter.

Winter brings it's caress
Winter brings it's caress
Delight rewards the soul
Delight rewards the soul
Winter rewards delight
it's soul brings the caress.

Winter glitter sparkles
and tempest floats away
it's cloudy soul does turn
the ice of lonely night
caress is the rewards
still breath brings cold delight.


©1999 DreamEvil


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DreamEvil
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1 posted 08-23-99 02:58 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thanks again, Nan!
Gentle Soul
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2 posted 08-23-99 03:04 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL.. I love it.. I can feel the cold air hittin me in the face now.. lol.. heheh.. you are a witty, intelligent, awesome poet.. keep it up brother!

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~one voice~
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3 posted 08-23-99 04:47 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dream, I so much enjoy watching your fabulous work become more and more wonderful! Keep it up! I'm proud of you!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


LngJhnAg
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4 posted 08-23-99 08:10 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

aha! A paradelle - I looked through previous submittals and couldn't find a one. If I may, I'd like to use this poem as an example for my daughter, Maggie.

Thanks
Nan
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5 posted 08-23-99 08:34 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Geesh..... give a guy a format - and he weaves a symphony with it....Very, very well done, indeed.....You ALMOST made me like winter, DE....

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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ ²1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75


DreamEvil
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6 posted 08-23-99 08:55 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thanks to all, especially Nan, the Lady who showed me a true challenge in this paradelle format.

Nan, twas quite a challenge you gave, though I'm humbled by your praise of the result. Thank you for such honors.

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hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 08-23-99 09:08 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Refer to my personal comment on ICq to this one Dream...well written
WhtDove
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Your talents are unending my friend! You mastered it, and brought it to life! Very well done!
Dragoness
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9 posted 08-23-99 10:45 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

I love winter...come on snow!! Well done !

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DreamEvil
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10 posted 08-23-99 10:21 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thanks much, my fellow poets.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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11 posted 08-24-99 08:03 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I thought the poem was wonderful! But why does anyone choose to write this way? Why is this a 'form'? Where did it come from? Would anyone write in nothing but paradelles?
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 08-24-99 08:30 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DreanEvil,
Not familar with the Paradelle but you seemed to have done a wonderful job.
Alwye
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In the space between moments


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Wonderfully done, Dream! You make me wish for a Minnesota winter..its creeping up awfully fast now..

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


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