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swan
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since 1999-07-19
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california, usa

0 posted 1999-08-22 11:50 PM



I'm missing you today like there will be no tomorrow.
Wondering if I should write songs to express all this pain and sorrow.
Thinking that it's probably good, that you never understood.
How serious are you? I don't want to loose it all.
You say i'm crazy but remember last fall?
Everytime you look into my eyes, my heart bleeds.
Can you see the beauty in my soul that your soul exceeds?
I wish I could have you but you've made a hobby out of twisting the knife,
the knife in my heart that makes it bleed.



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"You can't make a heart love somebody, you can tell it what to do but it won't listen at all. You can't make a heart love somebody, you can lead a heart to love, but you can't make it fall.--Clint Black



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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-08-23 02:27 AM


Very powerful.

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