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Love's Garden (my first Pantoum!!)

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 08-22-99 11:24 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

Two kindred souls meet in this dazzling garden.
The wind caresses the night like a lover's sigh.
Once more two lonely strangers embrace again.
Upon the silken wings of angels love flies.

The wind caresses the night like a lover's sigh.
The stars the only witness as shadows slowly combine.
Upon the silken wings of angels love flies.
With a dew moistened kiss your passion is mine.

The stars the only witness as shadows slowly combine.
Rays of pale moonlight gently move over your face.
With a dew moistened kiss your passion is mine.
Your love touches my soul like a heavenly grace.

Rays of pale moonlight gently move over your face.
In your eyes crystal tears of joy brightly glisten.
Your love touches my soul like a heavenly grace.
To the beating of your honest heart I quietly listen.

In your eyes crystal tears of joy brightly glisten.
Once more two lonely strangers embrace again.
To the beating of your honest heart I quietly listen.
Two kindred souls meet in this dazzling garden.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-22-99 11:35 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Bravo, Alwye! A worthy effort and an excellent result.

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Well, write poetry, for God's sake, it's the only thing that matters.

---Edward Estlin Cummings

Alwye
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2 posted 08-23-99 12:46 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Thank you, Balladeer!! I enjoy this form emmensly.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


Kyle_R
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3 posted 08-23-99 12:51 AM       View Profile for Kyle_R   Email Kyle_R   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kyle_R's Home Page   View IP for Kyle_R

wow. i love the way you began each stanza with the second line of the preceeding. brilliant work resounding with an echo of desire.
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4 posted 08-23-99 12:56 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I definitely agree with both you and Balladeer. I love this form as well, Alwye. You have excelled at it quite readily. Your subject is heartbreakingly beautiful, as well.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvilŠ


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Thank you both, Kyle and Dream, for your kind words!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


Nan
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6 posted 08-23-99 08:50 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

OK Krista
That's it!!!
I'm adopting you.....I've decided....
Tell your parents you'll see them after college...... They won't mind, will they??
Tell them it's for educational purposes....Ya think????
Seriously, you've done a very nice job on this - I really love it....

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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ ˛1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75


Alwye
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Hm, educational purposes, I like it!! Thanks a lot for your help and kind words, Nan!! Hm, what style should I attempt next?

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


 
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