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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
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0 posted 1999-08-22 07:33 PM


a picture's all i have
to remind of better times
a thought is all i want
to make her spin
so sweet
so soft
a little distant
maybe lost
but she is touched
shes rocks forth
does not see me
lost in the past
that blew up reality
i wander weak
watch her fade
my touched angel
my serene swan
you were so strong
weak was i
lost in spirt
lost in time



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caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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1 posted 1999-08-22 07:58 PM


This is really very lovely. It defines the emotions very clearly.

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