How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #1 Archive
 A Work of Art
 1 2 3 4
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

A Work of Art

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
caroline
Senior Member
since 08-16-99
Posts 1251
http://members.xoom.com/bellad


0 posted 08-22-99 07:18 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for caroline

A Work of Art

One slow stroke of your brush
Lightly coloring my world
Just a tint at first, a new shade of
Life that I had not seen before
Then more boldly the hues appeared and
Turned my world to rainbows of
Color and Light
Infusing my soul with your essence
Your touch
Your sweetness
Applied on my heart with
Gentle artist's wisdom
Drawing me into the sunlight
Which is your love
And it is there that I stay
Never to live in the darkness again


caroline
all rights reserved

------------------
The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
© Copyright 1999 Caroline - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 08-04-99
Posts 10270


1 posted 08-22-99 11:56 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Caroline, this is very beautiful, good work
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 06-05-99
Posts 26302
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA


2 posted 08-23-99 12:00 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Very passionate and well written.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 08-23-99 08:59 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very beautifully written. The imagery was great. Nice job ...looking forward to more. Welcome!!

------------------
"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
caroline
Senior Member
since 08-16-99
Posts 1251
http://members.xoom.com/bellad


4 posted 08-23-99 06:27 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Thanks all...this is the first poem I ever made public, a short six months ago. Although I've written for years, I would never show anyone. Thanks for the support!

------------------
The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
caroline will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #1 >> A Work of Art Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors