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Wind through your hair

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The Jackal
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0 posted 08-22-99 06:04 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

stand with me in the road of time
and say the words id hoped to hide
and ill give you all mine
the sun will dance with us
it must
lesser winds shall blow
through your hair
like my hands
that once were there
men hope for the most
but a peace so ordinary
scares me more
then the sound of empty
sad thats lies here



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swan
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1 posted 08-22-99 11:19 PM       View Profile for swan   Email swan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for swan

this is beautiful...if you don't mind me asking...what inspired you to write this?
swan

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"You can't make a heart love somebody, you can tell it what to do but it won't listen at all. You can't make a heart love somebody, you can lead a heart to love, but you can't make it fall.--Clint Black


swan
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2 posted 08-22-99 11:19 PM       View Profile for swan   Email swan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for swan

this is beautiful...if you don't mind me asking...what inspired you to write this?
swan

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"You can't make a heart love somebody, you can tell it what to do but it won't listen at all. You can't make a heart love somebody, you can lead a heart to love, but you can't make it fall.--Clint Black


Poet deVine
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3 posted 08-22-99 11:34 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is lovely...sad but lovely!
zipknee
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4 posted 08-23-99 04:09 AM       View Profile for zipknee   Email zipknee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for zipknee

a beautiful and stirring poem. i really like it.
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