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Some Thoughts

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Denise
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0 posted 08-22-99 03:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

Would things of spring seem quite as nice
Without harsh winter's wind and ice;
Without the summer's sultry air
Would spring seem even half as fair?

If rainy days were never here
Would still the fair ones seem as clear;
If skies above were never gray
Could azure steal my heart away?

Would joy still swell my heart the same
If sorrow never knew my name;
If pain had never stayed the night
Would times more kind appear as light?

High mountain peaks and canyons grand
Both speak His mighty awesome hand;
The desert sands, the oceans blue
Each cast, uniquely,heaven's hue.



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1 posted 08-22-99 03:39 PM       View Profile for swan   Email swan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for swan

Wow! This is amazing! And so true.
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Denise
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2 posted 08-22-99 05:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you Swan! I'll be looking for more of your work. You seem quite talented from the posting of today. I'm new to the Web, so I'm not too familiar with all this, but I'm learning.
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3 posted 08-22-99 09:30 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

I enjoyed this poem.
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4 posted 08-23-99 08:52 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is very nicely done the form good, the rythym and rhyme excellent. I really enjoyed and am looking forward to more...welcome!!
Denise
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5 posted 08-30-99 03:42 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you pen of passion and hoot_owl-rn for taking the time to read and comment! I really appreciate it.
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6 posted 08-30-99 03:47 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Very true, d. You have phrased it well-you have a gift! I love your poems!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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7 posted 08-30-99 09:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you Elizabeth for your kind comments .

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Denise
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Another Work of Art! Loved it!!!
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9 posted 08-30-99 10:31 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks again WhtDove! So glad that you enjoyed it!

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Denise
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10 posted 08-30-99 10:45 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Now this is poetry ... powerful message, artfully stated. I am impressed, and very glad you shared this inspiration.


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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


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11 posted 10-17-1999 12:08 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

You are a wonderful poet Denise and so good about responding to other's poems, so back up to the top with you too, for this one.
Denise
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12 posted 10-17-1999 01:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Why, thank you Martie, I'm glad you liked this. It was one of the first that I posted!


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Denise
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nice

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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Why, thank you, Saxoness! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

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Denise
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ah a sweet write
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16 posted 03-21-2005 02:02 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Denise~

And this ... this ... is a beauty, as only you can pen~

***Playing in the archives ...
having a Denise day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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