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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Would things of spring seem quite as nice Without harsh winter's wind and ice; Without the summer's sultry air Would spring seem even half as fair? If rainy days were never here Would still the fair ones seem as clear; If skies above were never gray Could azure steal my heart away? Would joy still swell my heart the same If sorrow never knew my name; If pain had never stayed the night Would times more kind appear as light? High mountain peaks and canyons grand Both speak His mighty awesome hand; The desert sands, the oceans blue Each cast, uniquely,heaven's hue. g |
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swan Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 58california, usa |
Wow! This is amazing! And so true. Swan |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you Swan! I'll be looking for more of your work. You seem quite talented from the posting of today. I'm new to the Web, so I'm not too familiar with all this, but I'm learning. |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
I enjoyed this poem. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is very nicely done the form good, the rythym and rhyme excellent. I really enjoyed and am looking forward to more...welcome!! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you pen of passion and hoot_owl-rn for taking the time to read and comment! I really appreciate it. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very true, d. You have phrased it well-you have a gift! I love your poems! ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you Elizabeth for your kind comments  .------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Another Work of Art! Loved it!!! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks again WhtDove! So glad that you enjoyed it! ------------------ Denise |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Now this is poetry ... powerful message, artfully stated. I am impressed, and very glad you shared this inspiration. ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You are a wonderful poet Denise and so good about responding to other's poems, so back up to the top with you too, for this one.  |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Why, thank you Martie, I'm glad you liked this. It was one of the first that I posted! ------------------ Denise |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
nice ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Why, thank you, Saxoness! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! ------------------ Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah a sweet write |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ And this ... this ... is a beauty, as only you can pen~ ***Playing in the archives ... having a Denise day~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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