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I Need to be Free

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Starith
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since 08-18-99
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Leesburg, FL USA


0 posted 08-22-99 12:16 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Starith

I Need to be Free

I need to be free
My soul must flee
From all of thee
Who try to hold me

I want to soar like an egale
My feet can't touch the ground
While you're around
I soar

My heart, like a bird in a cage,
Longs to be free
I need someone to comfort me
Someone who's touch can set me free

I need the woods, the air, the sea
For these things can set me free
But, just my soul do they release
For my heart remains unleashed

I need someone to break the chains
Which bind my heart where it remains
For then I can be completely free
Please come save me

For it is you who holds the keys
Which release this lock of these
Who criticize and do not see
That, I need to be free!

[This message has been edited by Starith (edited 08-22-99).]
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Starith
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since 08-18-99
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Leesburg, FL USA


1 posted 08-22-99 02:35 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

This is my first post here, and I would like it very much if I could get some feedback, thanks

K.


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Skyfyre
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2 posted 08-24-99 06:39 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Welcome, Starith ... I hope that someone sets you free.

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

 
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