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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-08-22 11:40 AM

Sweet mistress of the night, why do you hide?
Nightly you search the past for hidden verse.
Knowing you do so is a source of pride.
Without you our lives would be so much worse.

Nightly you search the past for hidden verse.
There are many who look for your replies.
Without you our lives would be so much worse.
I so wish you would open wide your eyes.

There are many who look for your replies.
I grin when your search finds us a jewel.
I so wish you would open wide your eyes.
Leaving us would be heartless and cruel.

I grin when your search finds us a jewel.
Friends like you are the appeal of this place.
Leaving us would be heartless and cruel.
We will help you through any pain you face.

Friends like you are the appeal of this place.
Think of the loss if you did not guide us.
We will help you through any pain you face.
You are a source of the joy inside us.

Think of the loss if you did not guide us.
Knowing you do so is a source of pride.
You are a cause of the joy inside us.
Sweet mistress of the night, why do you hide?

©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 1999-08-22 11:58 AM

DreamEvil,
You are having no trouble with Pantoums
This is another good one. Congrads.

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

2 posted 1999-08-22 01:19 PM

Very interesting. One of these days I should learn to write good poetry like this....well done.

INclan

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 1999-08-22 01:23 PM

....and the subject is very well-deserving.

Gentle Soul
Member

since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

4 posted 1999-08-22 03:08 PM

This is sweet..

and well written

bravo! hehehe

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Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 1999-08-22 03:33 PM

Wonderful!! I'm certainly coming to enjoy this form of poetry, especially when written by you. Exellent work.

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

6 posted 1999-08-22 04:34 PM

Very touching indeed! Sweet sentiment!
Great job Dream!

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

7 posted 1999-08-23 10:54 AM

Well done!!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

bleeding heart
New Member

since 1999-08-23

Posts 8
virginia minnesota USA

8 posted 1999-08-23 07:06 PM

How sweet that so many people seem to care for this person.

bleeding heart
New Member

since 1999-08-23

Posts 8
virginia minnesota USA

9 posted 1999-08-23 07:10 PM

I like this one. Was it written for a peticular person? If it was, I am glad to see that people do care.

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