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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-22-99 11:40 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Sweet mistress of the night, why do you hide?
Nightly you search the past for hidden verse.
Knowing you do so is a source of pride.
Without you our lives would be so much worse.

Nightly you search the past for hidden verse.
There are many who look for your replies.
Without you our lives would be so much worse.
I so wish you would open wide your eyes.

There are many who look for your replies.
I grin when your search finds us a jewel.
I so wish you would open wide your eyes.
Leaving us would be heartless and cruel.

I grin when your search finds us a jewel.
Friends like you are the appeal of this place.
Leaving us would be heartless and cruel.
We will help you through any pain you face.

Friends like you are the appeal of this place.
Think of the loss if you did not guide us.
We will help you through any pain you face.
You are a source of the joy inside us.

Think of the loss if you did not guide us.
Knowing you do so is a source of pride.
You are a cause of the joy inside us.
Sweet mistress of the night, why do you hide?


©1999 DreamEvil

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 08-22-99 11:58 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DreamEvil,
You are having no trouble with Pantoums
This is another good one. Congrads.
INclan
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2 posted 08-22-99 01:19 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Very interesting. One of these days I should learn to write good poetry like this....well done.

INclan
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3 posted 08-22-99 01:23 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

....and the subject is very well-deserving.
Gentle Soul
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4 posted 08-22-99 03:08 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

This is sweet.. and well written bravo! hehehe

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Alwye
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5 posted 08-22-99 03:33 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wonderful!! I'm certainly coming to enjoy this form of poetry, especially when written by you. Exellent work.

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

WhtDove
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6 posted 08-22-99 04:34 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Very touching indeed! Sweet sentiment!
Great job Dream!
Dragoness
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7 posted 08-23-99 10:54 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Well done!!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
bleeding heart
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8 posted 08-23-99 07:06 PM       View Profile for bleeding heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bleeding heart

How sweet that so many people seem to care for this person.
bleeding heart
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9 posted 08-23-99 07:10 PM       View Profile for bleeding heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bleeding heart

I like this one. Was it written for a peticular person? If it was, I am glad to see that people do care.
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