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Dark Angel
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0 posted 1999-08-22 10:25 AM


As I walk along the path of my journey
I thank goodness you are a part of it
Even though you are far away
In spirit you are here
And I feel you....
You walk beside me
As my shadow, never leaving my side
You touch me
Like the soft whisper of the wind
Brushing my face with such gentleness and warmth
You light up my existence, my being
Like the sun lights up the world
You sing the sweetest songs
Of hope and love
That touches my very soul
Like the hypnotic oceans and magic sounds of the sea shore
You are my life
You are my world
You are the moon which
Accompanies the stars which I look up to every night
Before I lay my soul to rest

© Copyright 1999 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 1999-08-22 10:44 AM


inspirational !!!
Dark Angel
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2 posted 1999-08-22 10:59 AM


Thanks Walt ;-)
Dark Angel
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3 posted 1999-08-23 06:22 PM


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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 1999-08-24 12:24 PM


There is a lot of love in this poem, Dark Angel. Good imagery also!

Dark Angel
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5 posted 1999-08-24 03:03 AM


Wow Poet, Your response means so much to me, thank you :-)
miriam
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6 posted 1999-08-26 02:24 PM


WOW!!!!!
Dark Angel
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7 posted 1999-08-26 11:56 PM


Thanks Miriam :-)
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