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DarkChiild
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Black Hole Sun
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Sitting in the shadow
of the light from a black sun
the death of hope
a life is lost
the dream has come undone
For a dream is all it was
and all it can ever be
for the hope I held
the dream I dreamt
was never meant for me
So now I breathe my final breath
for the life that's to be my death
I seek to find
but remain so blind
the future's looking grim
you seek to find,
yet remain so blind
we're both on the outsde looking in
So you sit here in the shadow
of the light from a black sun
the death of hope a life is lost
another dream that's come undone



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Wish in one hand, then defecate in the other and see which one fills up first.

--DarkChiild--

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INclan
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Interesting verse. I prefer to keep on with my dreams and if they die with me, then so be it. They are mine after all...even the dreams from my "dark side".
Seymour Tabin
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Dark child,
Well constructed but not my cup of tea.
I like a little sugar in it T'would taste a
little better to me.
 
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