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Effects of Strange Dreams Created by Little Naps

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Temptress
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The storms are about tonight,
As I turn and kick in my bed.
Residue of dreams follows me,
To the solace of awakening,
And I am intoxicated,
By the mere thought of words.
How strange to open drowsy eyes,
To the sound of the wind,
Calling my name from far reaching realms.
How it stirs things deep within,
To see the rain tapping at my window,
Drops throw themselves at the glass,
Waiting like serenading lovers,
To cover my shoulders,
While walking through trees,
And flirting with the lightning.
I follow many paths,
And change nightly.
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Sue
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1 posted 08-21-99 04:00 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Evocative, and beautifully written.
Poet deVine
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I've always liked your imagery! This is excellent!
Severn
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I am impressed! I get lost in my dreams - to the extent that they often become like memories. Who knows but that we don't just enter another actual world when we sleep! Awesome, beautiful work.
Alwye
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4 posted 08-21-99 11:05 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Maybe we indeed do go to another world when we sleep...wouldn't that be lovely? A beautiful piece of work.

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*Krista Knutson*

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The heart of you


5 posted 05-15-2002 03:05 AM       View Profile for Moonlight Romeo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moonlight Romeo

It would seem that you've always had that gift for imagery and thought.  The way that you can achieve such depth.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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I hate that...I know what you mean. I wonder why that is?
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Shedding wet skins and wearing windows.
 
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