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Dom Mart Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 164Florida |
I love to watch the sun rise. I love to watch it set In seasons and in climates Where it doesn't make me sweat, Where it doesn't sear my eyeballs And it doesn't scorch my hair, Where it doen't emit heat waves That coagulate the air, Where it doesn't make a sauna Of the front seat of my car Or make the tires it rides on The consistency of tar, Where it doesn't crack the paint On my withered window sill Or put me into debt for life To pay my air conditioning bill. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I had a giggle at this. The sun can be cruel as well as kind. Welcome to our home of poetry! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dom Mart, Living in Florida I could appreciate this poem. Nice job. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Dom, So hot you can hang your clothes outside for 10 minutes and they're dry...so hot it sucks the life right out of your lungs? Am I close? I loved your poem by the way..... but couldn't access your web page!  [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 08-21-99).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Bring on the heat, Baby! I hate cold weather with a passion. I also hate rain every afternoon, like in Florida in the summer. I also hate..... oops, time for me to head for the Alley...lol |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Not too much sweating going on in Chicago, 'eh? Let me tell you, I get massive head-pounds behind my eyeballs when they get seared....never enough Tylenol when that happens, and boy do I get grouchy, too! (yeah me, grouchy!) "Tires...the consistency of tar.." I loved that line ! I've often wondered how a vehicle holds up to the heat like that, especially when the motors hot too!!! You know when the roads are black sticky, that it's just too darn hot !!! LOL The only time I love the sun, is when I'm near water, and in my thong!!! ROFLOL ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Never mind the sun, I liked the poem! |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
an enjoyable read, Dom...i don't much like the searing sun either  ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...your countenance...eight short weeks...My One and Only...hoarse whispers... What will it be?...break my heart...hour after hour...serving wench...take a guess...sink or swim...stolen hours...the mistress... companion...Perfection...a little girl...Mr. Jones...life is like...insomnia...devotion...too soon...07-20-69...craving...change... Master...apart...pride...plain...hush...then...D/s...shameless self-promotion [This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-21-99).] |
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la hac' awwni Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 44Euless, Tx, 76039 |
...where do you live? Dallas? 23 straight days of 100+. Enjoyed the poem ------------------ |
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la hac' awwni Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 44Euless, Tx, 76039 |
...where do you live? Dallas? 23 straight days of 100+. Enjoyed the poem ------------------ |
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