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Dom Mart
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0 posted 08-21-99 08:22 AM       View Profile for Dom Mart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Dom Mart's Home Page   View IP for Dom Mart



I love to watch the sun rise.
I love to watch it set
In seasons and in climates
Where it doesn't make me sweat,
Where it doesn't sear my eyeballs
And it doesn't scorch my hair,
Where it doen't emit heat waves
That coagulate the air,
Where it doesn't make a sauna
Of the front seat of my car
Or make the tires it rides on
The consistency of tar,
Where it doesn't crack the paint
On my withered window sill
Or put me into debt for life
To pay my air conditioning bill.
© Copyright 1999 Dom Mart - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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since 07-17-99
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1 posted 08-21-99 08:24 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I had a giggle at this. The sun can be cruel as well as kind. Welcome to our home of poetry!
Seymour Tabin
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since 07-07-99
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Tamarac Fla


2 posted 08-21-99 08:30 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dom Mart,
Living in Florida I could appreciate this poem. Nice job.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


3 posted 08-21-99 09:02 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Dom, So hot you can hang your clothes outside for 10 minutes and they're dry...so hot it sucks the life right out of your lungs? Am I close?

I loved your poem by the way..... but couldn't access your web page!


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LngJhnAg
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since 07-23-99
Posts 3654
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


4 posted 08-21-99 09:11 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Bring on the heat, Baby! I hate cold weather with a passion. I also hate rain every afternoon, like in Florida in the summer. I also hate..... oops, time for me to head for the Alley...lol
poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
Arkansas


5 posted 08-21-99 11:13 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Not too much sweating going on in Chicago, 'eh? Let me tell you, I get massive head-pounds behind my eyeballs when they get seared....never enough Tylenol when that happens, and boy do I get grouchy, too! (yeah me, grouchy!) "Tires...the consistency of tar.." I loved that line ! I've often wondered how a vehicle holds up to the heat like that, especially when the motors hot too!!! You know when the roads are black sticky, that it's just too darn hot !!! LOL The only time I love the sun, is when I'm near water, and in my thong!!! ROFLOL

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Sue
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since 08-04-99
Posts 407
France


6 posted 08-21-99 05:15 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Never mind the sun, I liked the poem!
elvira
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since 07-06-99
Posts 985
California


7 posted 08-21-99 06:43 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

an enjoyable read, Dom...i don't much like the searing sun either

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...your countenance...eight short weeks...My One and Only...hoarse whispers...
What will it be?...break my heart...hour after hour...serving wench...take a guess...sink or swim...stolen hours...the mistress...
companion...Perfection...a little girl...Mr. Jones...life is like...insomnia...devotion...too soon...07-20-69...craving...change...
Master...apart...pride...plain...hush...then...D/s...shameless self-promotion



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la hac' awwni
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since 08-02-99
Posts 44
Euless, Tx, 76039


8 posted 08-21-99 07:31 PM       View Profile for la hac' awwni   Email la hac' awwni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for la hac' awwni

...where do you live? Dallas? 23 straight days of 100+. Enjoyed the poem

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la hac' awwni
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since 08-02-99
Posts 44
Euless, Tx, 76039


9 posted 08-21-99 07:32 PM       View Profile for la hac' awwni   Email la hac' awwni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for la hac' awwni

...where do you live? Dallas? 23 straight days of 100+. Enjoyed the poem

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