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Emptiness

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~one voice~
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0 posted 08-21-99 08:06 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

I am filled with emptiness inside me.
I hunger for those emotions gone by.
I long for passion that you stir in me.
I long for your kisses- I cannot lie.

I hunger for those emotions gone by.
Memories of you are my great past-time.
I long for your kisses- I cannot lie.
You’ve inspired all my sweet prose and rhyme.

Memories of you are my great past-time.
Your absence leaves my heart with such sweet void.
You’ve inspired all my sweet prose and rhyme.
Your memory n’er leaves my words destroyed.

Your absence leaves my heart with such sweet void.
I miss you more than I could ever say.
Your memory n’er leaves my words destroyed.
You are my entity- my night and day.

I miss you more than I could ever say.
I love you more than all the grains of sand.
You are my entity- my night and day.
I need you to hold tight to my hand.

I love you more than all the grains of sand.
I long for passion that you stir in me.
I need you to hold tight to my hand.
I am filled with emptiness inside me.

©1999 Erin Solari


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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


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DreamEvil
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1 posted 08-21-99 08:08 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Awesome pantoum, my dear. I knew you were up to the task. Writer's block be damned.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


~one voice~
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2 posted 08-21-99 08:11 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Ahh... thank you very much... I hope your challenge cured it!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Severn
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3 posted 08-21-99 08:22 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wow........
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 08-21-99 08:41 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

One Voice,
Enjoyed the Pantoum, nice job.
~one voice~
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5 posted 08-21-99 10:32 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you so much! Both of you...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Alwye
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In the space between moments


6 posted 08-21-99 11:24 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wonderful, one voice!! Exellent work!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

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7 posted 08-21-99 11:38 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

A very worthy effort, one voice. Well Done.

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Well, write poetry, for God's sake, it's the only thing that matters.

---Edward Estlin Cummings
~one voice~
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8 posted 08-22-99 01:14 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you so much.. once again...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Emmy
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9 posted 08-22-99 09:36 AM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

WOW, I really liked the way you played with the lines in your poem... repeating certain ones in the next stanza like that. It really helped keep the flow, and flow it certainly did! Well done, one voice, well done!
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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10 posted 08-26-99 09:23 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Lovely and poignant, I can relate to this one!
passing shadows
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11 posted 04-17-2004 02:30 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I have the same hunger
 
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