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Just a ditty.

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-21-99 07:26 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

The quintessential fire that would fuel my burning desire for this ecstacy of release that I find in verse, might soon cease to be a curse and rather a blessing instead.

Rambling along through random things absurd leaves me babbling each word that comes to mind in a manner designed to mesmerize and cauterize with my wit or lack of it.

So if any decide they don't like this rhyme and happen to find the time, please respond in kind as well those that are of like mind since I treasure other views, at least those that don't abuse.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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Sunshine
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1 posted 08-21-99 07:31 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Speechified poems...what a treat!

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Severn
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2 posted 08-21-99 07:31 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

LOL! YOu winder of words you. You mean writing ever was a curse? Are you mad!!! jk
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 08-21-99 08:54 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DreamEvil,
All I can say is,
It's a pity
It's only a ditty.
Marvalus web of words and ties and
I'm sure it will catch many flies.
LngJhnAg
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4 posted 08-21-99 09:03 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Dreamer

Lol - this was a tricky bit of reading - I had to go over it a couple times to get the hang of it. You never fail to amaze me with your mercurial use of styles. I picked up a lot of the rhymes, but the last rhyme of the first stanza escapes me. Was that deliberate? Additionally, the last rhymes of the last two stanzas hit with different numbers of words. This threw me off (no difficult task) a little, but I reread these stanzas with the expectation of change, and it worked out OK.
pen of passion
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5 posted 08-21-99 10:19 AM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

Mr. Evil, Your skill with words leaves me hungry for more.
Dragoness
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6 posted 08-21-99 10:38 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Nicely done brother!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
~one voice~
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7 posted 08-21-99 10:41 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Interesting new style Dream... I like it!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 08-21-99 10:53 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Fabulous darling! I loved this..."ecstasy of release..." and it should "be a blessing!" I repeat myself when I say, that poetry is inexpensive therapy! I have overcome many emotional nightmares just by "walking myself through it" with a poem....and ppsssttt....(motioning over) come a bit closer, and I'll let you in on a little secret....
~~whispering~~I don't even need SEX anymore now that I write such detailed poems in Adult, and read what others write!.....he he he Talk about safe sex....'eh??
On a more serious note, I'm with LngJhnAg when he says he had to read it a time or two to get a feel for the style, but I enjoyed the challenge!! Such a very nice piece, and definately worth the extra effort to find the "beat" in it !!
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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet



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Gentle Soul
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9 posted 08-21-99 12:42 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

you amaze me sometimes.. ya know it? hehehe...

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Gėnt£ė¤§°ū£

Sue
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10 posted 08-21-99 04:45 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

My views will certainly not abuse your trust since having read your poem I must say "It's fascinating."
DreamEvil
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11 posted 08-21-99 11:40 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Quite a response to this piece, thanks all, though I'm sorry to say this is just the way it flows and I trust that you will find the time to follow more of my random rhyme.
wayoutwalt
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12 posted 08-21-99 11:51 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

sounds like a good piece to take slammin!!!!
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